The Stories of OP: Where Am I? - Part Two

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Anonymous 02/17/11(Thu)23:52:54 No.310205446

In this thread you will choose your own story adventure. You will choose "A" or "B", and then I will write the next section of the story based on your response.

You wake up in the morning and slide out of bed. You groggily place your fleet onto the soft carpet and then stand. You rub your neck and look down to see a red syringe mark. You look around the room and realize that you have no idea where you are, who you are, or how you got here. You look in the mirror to see a beautiful, 16 year old girl with long, red hair, and a stunning, tight body.

You run your hands down your body. You feel exhilarated as you admire yourself in the mirror. You have small breasts and you are white. You turn in the mirror and admire your ass. It is also fantastic.

You look around the room. It is empty except for a mirror, a closet, and a bed. You look inside the closet and see a wide array of outfits available, from unusual, exotic outfits like a French maid outfit to casual clothing. You decide that your options are really the extremes.

A. Put on the French maid outfit.

B. Put on some casual clothing. You have no idea where you are. Why would you prance around like a French maid?

>> Anonymous 02/17/11(Thu)23:53:52 No.310205640

You can read all the most recent stories except for yesterday's at storiesofop.blogspot.com

If anyone tells me this is a repost, read on and see what it actually is. I doubt anyone from yesterday will be around right now... but believe me, it's not a repost.

>> Anonymous 02/17/11(Thu)23:56:57 No.310206275

>> Anonymous 02/17/11(Thu)23:58:26 No.310206623

You walk over to the closet and look inside. There is no underwear in there.

You decide that you are going to put on the French maid outfit. You may not know where you are, but you feel somewhat giddy and a bit turned on.

You pull on the French maid outfit and look in the mirror again. You look absolutely fantastic in the outfit. You turn and shake your ass in the mirror, the short skirt barely covering your bottom.

You open the door and take a look out the door. You appear to be in some kind of large home. You look up and down the hallway and there are a few doors down the hallway and then a set of stairs at the end of the hall.

A. Test the doors and see what is inside.

B. Head down the stairs and see what you can find in the house.

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)00:00:53 No.310207151

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)00:03:13 No.310207676

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)00:03:14 No.310207677

>>310206623

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)00:04:06 No.310207862

You walk down the stairs, carefully avoiding making any noise as you step down the carpet. You are not wearing any shoes, but you are also beginning to feel a bit self-conscious in the maid outfit. As you arrive at the bottom of the stairs you take a look around. You are in the living room of a large house, and looking out the back door you see a large, spectacular yard. There is even a fountain. There are a number of men working in the backyard, mowing the lawn, pruning plants and doing other such things.

You look to your right and see an open kitchen. You feel somewhat hungry, as if you have not eaten for a long while.

A. Head into the kitchen and see if you can rustle up some food.

B. Walk into the backyard and ask the gardeners where you are.

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)00:05:20 No.310208121

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>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)00:07:05 No.310208510

You walk into the kitchen and go for the door to the large refrigerator. As you put your hand on the door a man walks up in a butler's outfit walks up and stops you. You are startled, and go to cover up in your maid outfit.

"Ma'am," he begins, "you really should not be rummaging around in the kitchen. You know that I am always here to cook whatever you would like if you want to eat." He smiles at you kindly.

You look at him, unsure what is going on. You shy away from him, embarrassed with your outfit and the fact that you are not wearing any underwear.

A. "Where the fuck am I and what is going on here?"

B. "Can you cook me some breakfast? I am starving."

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)00:09:58 No.310209197

Is creepy man creepy?

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)00:11:54 No.310209639

>>310208510

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)00:12:01 No.310209670

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)00:13:35 No.310210035

"Can you cook me some breakfast? I am starving," you say to the man.

He smiles at you. "Of course I can cook you some breakfast, ma'am. I was just about to cook some bacon, sausage, eggs and pancakes. If you take a seat at the table you can sit and wait, and I am sure that some of your friends will be down soon to sit with you."

You smile at him. "That sounds nice," you say with a smile.

He looks back at you. "Interesting outfit choice this morning, ma'am. I am sure the other girls will be very pleased."

You are not sure what to say. You take a seat at the table and he begins cooking.

A. Ask him some questions about where you are.

B. Sit and wait to see who else arrives at the table.

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)00:15:58 No.310210564

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)00:18:39 No.310211152

"So can you tell me where I am?" you ask the man.

He looks over at you. "As I always say, ma'am, my place is not to discuss such things with you. My place is merely to cook you food and ensure you have everything you could possibly need."

You look at him. "Well, do you know what my name is at least?"

He smiles at you, "Ma'am, it's not my place to discuss things like that. As far as I know, you are just ma'am to me."

It doesn't sound like you are going to get anything out of him. Every time he opens one of the drawers he uses a passkey, and the drawers close behind him as he cooks.

He places a plate in front of you. It looks delicious, with bacon, sausage, eggs and pancakes doused in maple syrup.

A. Eat up!

B. Wait to see who else comes to eat before taking a bite.

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)00:20:27 No.310211555

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)00:20:42 No.310211610

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)00:22:06 No.310211932

You sit waiting patiently at the table, not wanting to eat before you see someone else come down for food.

Another girl walks into the room. She is tall and looks to be about 18. She smiles at you and takes a seat at the table.

"Yay! Breakfast!" she says to you with a smile. The man presents a plate in front of her, and she immediately digs into the plate, gobbling down the food.

She looks at you with a grin. "You look very beautiful this morning. I really love your outfit. Normally I don't wear outfits like that in the morning, but you look really beautiful." She smiles at you and looks lustily into your eyes.

A. "Who the fuck am I? Where the fuck are we?"

B. "Umm, do I know you?"

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)00:22:30 No.310212009

a!!

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)00:25:06 No.310212543

"Who the fuck am I? Where the fuck are we?" you ask her. She looks at you and smiles.

"Why would you ask me something like that? I'm not here to answer your questions. You're you, and I'm me, of course. We receive this lesson every day." She smiles at you and continues eating.

"I really do love your outfit, though. You look very beautiful this morning," she says to you with a smile. She has long, brown hair and a stunning smile.

Other girls begin to filter into the room, and they all sit down and begin eating. Most of them comment on how pretty you look in the French maid outfit, which makes you feel self conscious. They are all wearing casual clothing.

A. Eat your breakfast.

B. Go back upstairs and get dressed in something more casual.

C. Just wait.

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)00:25:59 No.310212707

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)00:27:11 No.310212970

>>310212543

A, eat up

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)00:29:14 No.310213361

You begin eating your breakfast. If all the other girls are doing it you may as well do so too.

You smile at the other girls around you, and they speak with each other about meaningless nothing. "I love swimming," one says to another. "Yes, swimming is fantastic!"

As you get partway through your eggs you begin to feel as if you are floating and you smart to smile. A feeling of euphoria begins to well up inside you. You look down at your eggs. They really are delicious. You look at the first girl and smile at her. "You really are beautiful," you say to her with a smile. She is so very pretty.

You devour the rest of your food, and as you finish you feel fantastic. You feel almost dizzy with satisfaction. You look over at the man. "That was fantastic!" you say to him.

He merely smiles at you.

You hear a PA system come on, and a calm, soothing voice comes over the system, "Girls, it is time to head to the swimming room for morning conditioning."

The women all stand, big smiles on their face, and begin filing out the kitchen and down a long hallway. They are really so beautiful. You stand and follow them.

A. Follow them down the hall to swimming.

B. Go out to explore the back garden.

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)00:30:17 No.310213567

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)00:30:20 No.310213581

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)00:30:27 No.310213605

b, even though i feel it'll end badly

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)00:32:28 No.310213986

You feel the urge to follow the girls, they are so beautiful, but as you walk down the hallway towards the swimming room you look back and see the door to the back garden. The garden looks beautiful as well. You smile to yourself. You feel like playing in the beautiful garden.

As you approach the back door it slides open automatically. It is sunny outside. As the sun hits your face you look up into the sky and smile, feeling its warm embrace.

The backyard is large and expansive. It is filled with men who are working: planting plants, mowing the lawn, cutting pieces of the yard. You cannot see where the yard ends it is so big and there are hedges everywhere.

A. Go up to a gardener and ask him what he is doing.

B. See if you can walk around to the front of the house.

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)00:33:03 No.310214110

>>310213986

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)00:35:51 No.310214659

You turn to your right and begin walking down a pathway around the house. The house is very large, at least three stories tall. As you walk by some of the gardeners they turn their faces away from you. You feel shy in your maid's outfit in front of these pretty men. They all look so nice in the morning sun. As you look at them you begin to feel less self-conscious in the maid outfit. You can feel the warm breeze between your thighs and you begin to feel excited.

You reach the edge of the house and there is a tall, black fence and a thick hedge. There does not appear to be any way around it.

A. Ask one of the gardeners where you are and if he can help you.

B. Go back inside and see if you can go swimming with the girls still.

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)00:36:29 No.310214788

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)00:36:36 No.310214810

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)00:36:40 No.310214829

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)00:38:33 No.310215209

You walk up to one of the pretty gardeners. "Sir, can you tell me where I am and maybe where I should be going?"

He is young, in his mid-twenties, and muscular, but he looks back at you with fear in his eyes. "Ma'am, I am not supposed to talk to you. I know you are trouble. Please just go back inside. It's time for swimming now. Don't you like swimming, ma'am?"

You look at him in surprise. The pretty boy looks so scared. How could you be trouble?

A. "Can't you help me and tell me where I am? I am not trouble..."

B. "Isn't there anything I can do to persuade you?"

C. Go back inside and head for the swimming room.

>> i have !ASPergErsw 02/18/11(Fri)00:38:55 No.310215267

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)00:40:08 No.310215518

shit's tense

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)00:40:56 No.310215696

"Isn't there anything I can do to persuade you?" you ask the man. He looks at you and his eyes widen, "I am not stupid. Please. Please, ma'am, just go back inside. I don't want to end up like my friend."

What the hell is going on? Why is this pretty boy so scared of you?

You reach out to touch his arm, but he backs away from you. "Please, ma'am, if you don't go back inside I will have to call for help and I will probably get in trouble. Can you please go back inside ma'am?"

The other gardeners have all stopped and are watching this exchange, fear in their eyes.

A. Go back inside and go swimming.

B. Go and try to talk to some of the other gardeners.

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)00:41:30 No.310215811

Sit on his dick

>> i have !ASPergErsw 02/18/11(Fri)00:41:39 No.310215833

a, but say okay with a really sad tone ;__;

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)00:41:56 No.310215895

B! fuck the systen

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)00:42:09 No.310215936

inb4 Person's Unknown plot

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)00:43:03 No.310216089

You leave the man standing there and walk over to one of the other gardeners. Immediately he looks down and won't meet your gaze.

"Can you tell me where I am?" you ask him.

He ignores you and just plants his shovel back in the ground and continues digging.

"Please? Sir?" He says nothing, ignoring you.

You hear a whisper from one of the gardeners. "Come over here and I'll help you," he whispers. You look over at him. He has his head down and is not looking at you.

A. Go over and talk to him.

B. Head back inside. You want to go back and see the other beautiful girls.

>> i have !ASPergErsw 02/18/11(Fri)00:43:57 No.310216252

inb4 someone trolls with b

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)00:44:00 No.310216260

Its pedobear ...

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)00:44:16 No.310216308

i once saw a photo of a texted based rpg containing the story of a guy who tried to help a gnome but fucked his whole village and was then killed by monsters by the game master anyone have that pic by chance?

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)00:44:54 No.310216428

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)00:45:13 No.310216494

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"come over here and I'll help you"

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)00:45:58 No.310216657

You walk over to him and stand in front of him. He looks very pretty, just like all the other men. You smile at him. "Can you help me?" you ask him.

He looks up at you and grimaces, looking over his shoulder. "Keep your fucking voice down. We don't want a repeat of what happened yesterday..."

You whisper to him, "Can you help me?"

He looks at you. "I can help you. But you have to trust me. I will help you at the party tonight, but until then keep your wits about you and don't eat the food. Just follow the other girls around, but don't eat."

A. "Can't you just tell me what the fuck is going on here?"

B. Nod to him and head back inside to see if you can catch up with swimming.

>> i have !ASPergErsw 02/18/11(Fri)00:46:57 No.310216863

i KNEW there was something about the food

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)00:47:18 No.310216924

>> Ungodlyone 02/18/11(Fri)00:47:36 No.310216994

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Zorklan, bitch.

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)00:48:36 No.310217195

"Can't you just tell me what the fuck is going on here?" you ask him.

He grabs your arm and holds it tightly. "Keep your fucking voice down. I'm not dying for you... I'm not going to let that happen to me. Just shut the fuck up, go inside, and keep your head down until the party tonight. If I can help you, I will. But remember, don't eat a fucking thing!"

You look at him and nod. He slackens his grip on your arm.

A. Head back upstairs and get changed into something more comfortable.

B. Go see if you can find the girls swimming.

C. Go tell the cook that one of the gardeners outside was scaring you.

>> i have !ASPergErsw 02/18/11(Fri)00:50:14 No.310217477

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)00:50:47 No.310217591

Let's go with B.

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)00:52:05 No.310217851

"Goodbye pretty man," you say to him with a smile. He looks so nice in the sunlight, with his hard body and tanned face. You turn, shake your ass a little in your skirt so that all the gardeners can see, and then walk back inside. You walk through the kitchen, smiling at the cook as you go, and then into the hallway where the swimming door was.

You walk into the change room and look around. The room is filled with the clothing of all the other girls, and there are bikini bathing suits laid out in nearly every size.

A. Strip naked and head for the pool.

B. Put on one of the bathing suits that would fit you and head for the pool.

>> i have !ASPergErsw 02/18/11(Fri)00:52:53 No.310217998

a :3

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)00:52:54 No.310218004

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)00:53:26 No.310218105

I'm feeling B again.

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)00:54:15 No.310218257

>>310217998

dude we're supposed to not arouse any suspicion!!

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)00:55:50 No.310218573

You pull off the maid outfit and let it all drop to the floor around you. You feel wonderful, and you see no reason to get dressed before you go swimming. You walk out the door of the change room and into the swimming area.

There is a man standing there supervising the other girls as they swim back and forth in the pool and splash each other. He looks at you with surprise, but he smiles at you. "You are late, ma'am! And not really dressed for the occasion." He laughs a hearty laugh.

"That is no problem though, my little dear," he says with a big smile. "Into the pool with you; swim with the other pretty girls."

You smile at him. The other girls look so beautiful swimming back and forth in the pool in their bathing suits.

You jump into the pool and head for the first girl that you had met in the morning. She grabs you with a hug and pulls you close. "Hello you!" she says to you and gives you a kiss on the cheek. "You look so beautiful and... so naked!" she laughs and the two of you spin around a bit in the pool.

A. Give her a kiss.

B. Follow the man's directions and swim your laps.

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)00:56:27 No.310218678

>>310218257

Now you are going to arouse everyone...

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)00:56:45 No.310218726

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)00:57:57 No.310218949

>>310218678

If I wanted erotica I'd read erotica...

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:00:04 No.310219284

You give her a kiss, your feet holding you up in the water. She responds passionately, her tongue meeting with yours. She's so beautiful, and her tongue feels so fantastic. You can feel her arms wrap around you as you kick your legs.

You feel her hands slide down to your ass and you feel a heat welling inside of you at her touch. You lose yourself in the kiss, letting your body slide back and forth against hers. She's so beautiful and it feels so fantastic.

"Hey!" the man is yelling at you from the sidelines. "All of you out of the pool. Seems we can't do anything today without someone deciding it's kissy time."

All the girls laugh and smile at each other, and the girl you are with lets go of your ass and slides out of the pool. You follow.

There is a table with fruit at the side, and you see a couple of the girls pick up some food to snack on. The girl you are with holds your hand and heads over to the table. Her hand feels wonderful against your skin.

She goes to grab a piece of fruit.

A. "Don't do that."

B. "Can I have some fruit too."

C. Say nothing and let her eat the fruit.

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:00:21 No.310219322

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>>310218726

suspicion is aroused

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:01:05 No.310219451

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:01:23 No.310219502

lone wolf

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:01:23 No.310219505

>>310219284

ccccccccccc

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:01:29 No.310219525

C. Leave her be.

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:01:37 No.310219557

C duh!

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:02:22 No.310219690

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:02:42 No.310219758

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>>310219284

/b/

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:03:04 No.310219822

You say nothing to her as she grabs some strawberries and throws them into her mouth. She gobbles them down and then takes your hand and leads you back into the change room. She looks back at you and smiles, her lips red with strawberry juice. She's so beautiful. You feel the desperate need to kiss her. All the other girls are so pretty as well.

You walk into the change room and everyone walks into a mass shower room. You step under the hot water and it feels fantastic as it runs over your naked body. You shiver with pleasure and smile at the girl beside you.

She takes your hand and smiles at you.

A. Kiss her.

B. Get dressed.

>> i have !ASPergErsw 02/18/11(Fri)01:03:43 No.310219949

i must <3

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:03:47 No.310219956

>>310219822

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:03:49 No.310219963

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:04:03 No.310220010

B. Don't go falling for traps.

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:04:51 No.310220149

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>>310219949

what have you done...

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:07:12 No.310220554

You kiss her softly on the lips. She responds by kissing you back. She's so beautiful.

You feel her hands moving around your back and pulling you close to her. Your tongue moves against hers. You look around and notice that many of the other girls are kissing each other.

The girl slides her hand down between your thighs and you can feel her probing between your legs. You feel fingers against your pussy and you gasp. It feels fantastic.

She slides down to her knees in front of you and begins kissing the inside of your thighs. You gasp and moan softly, feeling the hot water pouring over you and her tongue against you.

Everything feels amazing as her tongue laps up against the outside of your pussy lips. You grab her hair and pull her tight against your wet hole.

She begins to tongue your clit, and you gasp as you feel her tongue against you. You can feel her tongue running circles around your clit and it is amazing. The hot water is pouring down your back and you begin to gasp. You look around the room and see the other girls all in couplings. They are all so beautiful.

You moan loudly. "Mmmmm, that's so fantastic, baby!" you say to her.

A voice comes over the loudspeaker. "Girls, it is time to head out front to hear what outfit you get to wear tonight."

The girls all begin to reluctantly disentangle themselves from each other.

A. Hold the girl against you and make sure she licks you to orgasm.

B. Let her go. Follow all the other girls. You need to remember what the gardener said.

>> Ungodlyone 02/18/11(Fri)01:07:23 No.310220591

MORE?

>> i have !ASPergErsw 02/18/11(Fri)01:07:57 No.310220697

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:08:06 No.310220723

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:09:32 No.310221002

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>>310220697

pic related

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:10:05 No.310221087

The girl goes to pull her head from between your legs, but you pull her closer. She continues licking, her tongue lapping back and forth against you. You moan and wrap your fingers through her hair. It feels like the most wondrous experience of your life, although you remember nothing, and you cannot let her stop.

Her tongue continues to flick back and forth against your clit and suddenly you let out a scream and gasp, your legs tightening. You fall back against the shower wall and slide slowly to the floor, your legs quivering as you orgasm.

You look at the girl and smile. She's so beautiful.

A. Tell her that you are going to help her escape.

B. Time to get dressed. You are supposed to follow the other girls.

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:10:59 No.310221251

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>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:11:05 No.310221276

>>310220554

chicks like orgasms

A should be more realistic

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:11:07 No.310221283

>> i have !ASPergErsw 02/18/11(Fri)01:11:11 No.310221301

please <3333

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:11:12 No.310221303

B. Leave her.

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:11:32 No.310221381

bbbbbb

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:12:13 No.310221523

>>310221276

FUCK THAT BITCH

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:13:06 No.310221687

b shes already eaten

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:13:52 No.310221834

You smile at her, the water running over your bodies. "I am going to help you get out of here," you say to her.

She looks at you. "Why would you want to help me get out of here? We all love it here. Don't we all love it here? Everyone is so beautiful."

You look at her. "Don't you want to find a way out of this?"

She looks back at you, not seeming to understand. "What would I find my way out of? We are all so happy here. And I'm happy with you! You're so beautiful... I want to go see what I get to wear tonight!"

You look at her and grimace. She looks so beautiful and it seems so logical. Why did the pretty man think that you had to escape?

A. "Just keep quiet about it. I will help you out of here later."

B. "You're so beautiful. Of course I just want to stay here with you!"

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:14:13 No.310221880

Anyone thinking this is a lot like the demon headmaster but with naked lesbian chicks?

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:14:37 No.310221958

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I love that choose your own adventure threads are a "thing" on /b/ now.

I love it doubly that 80% of the time they dissolve into lesbian literotica.

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:14:38 No.310221959

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:14:51 No.310221998

>>310221880

I have never read that. I hope you are liking it though...

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:14:54 No.310222012

a aaa a

>> i have !ASPergErsw 02/18/11(Fri)01:15:51 No.310222190

>>310221834

thank you for following my request <3

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:15:58 No.310222218

>>310221998

english kids tv program

I am indeed enjoying

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:16:01 No.310222231

>>310221834

oh shit oh shit oh shit

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:16:46 No.310222362

"Just keep quiet about it. I will help you out of here later," you say to her.

She smiles at you. "Don't you want to get dressed in our pretty outfits for tonight now?"

You grin at her. "Okay, let's go." You take her by the hand and walk out into the change room. The only clothing left is her outfit and your French maid uniform.

You dry off and then pull on the maid uniform. You feel beautiful in the maid uniform, and you feel as if you are glowing from the inside out. The girl beside you is so pretty as well. You smile at her.

A. Tell her to lead you to the fitting area.

B. Head out into the hallway and see if you can figure out what is going on.

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:17:28 No.310222515

>>310222362

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:17:29 No.310222517

either bro

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:17:51 No.310222600

>>310222515

This

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:18:08 No.310222648

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>>310222362

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:20:12 No.310223053

"Lead on," you say to her with a smile.

She holds your hand. Her palm is warm and there is a shine in her eyes as she pulls you out through the hallway. You turn left, away from the kitchen and the backyard, and head towards the front of the house.

You walk into a huge entrance room and you see a large set of front doors, with two sets of staircases leading up on either side. The room looks beautiful, and there are soft lights hanging everywhere from the ceiling as if you are in a cave.

She pulls you into another room and suddenly there are women all around you holding outfits. A woman stands in the middle and directs them back and forth as they push the girls into this outfit and that.

An elderly, kind looking woman latches onto your arm and smiles. "Time to find your outfit for tonight, dear."

A. "Can you tell me what is going on?"

B. "I hope my dress is very beautiful! I want to be as pretty as all the other girls!"

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:20:57 No.310223193

bbb

>> noko Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:21:21 No.310223264

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:21:50 No.310223346

>>310223193

phew. needed to be cool in front of the elder. She's probably one of "them"

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:22:01 No.310223377

>>310223053

b of course, don't mess with the suspicious lady

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:22:57 No.310223567

"I hope my dress is very beautiful! I want to be as pretty as all the other girls!" you say to her. She smiles at you.

"I will be sure to make you as pretty as everyone else! Now out of that silly maid outfit. Why would you put on such a thing in the morning?"

You smile at her. "I have no idea," you say and then giggle.

You shrug out of the maid outfit and then suddenly you are caught up in a whir of motion as the woman begins pushing you in and out of dresses, constantly looking to the woman in the center of the room for approval.

You hear to your right the girl you were with earlier talking to the woman helping her. "And then she said that we are going to get away tonight! Isn't that exciting? She's so pretty, isn't she?" She's pointing at you.

A. "We are going to get away to our rooms and be together tonight. Yes we are! We are both every excited."

B. Calmly turn and walk out of the room.

>> i have !ASPergErsw 02/18/11(Fri)01:23:26 No.310223634

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:23:46 No.310223685

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:24:05 No.310223744

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:24:40 No.310223836

>>310223567

ohshitohshitohshit

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:25:21 No.310223950

"We are going to get away to our rooms and be together tonight. Yes we are! We are both every excited," you say to the two of them. The other girl looks at you and smiles. The lady with her looks at you suspiciously.

She nods to the woman who is with you. She looks at you and then back at the lady. "I think she's fine..."

The other lady looks back at her. "But what about yesterday?"

The lady with you shrugs. "These things happen from time to time. Don't worry about it." The lady with you turns back to you and pulls a piece of bread out of her sewing kit. "Why don't you have some nice bread, dear?"

A. "Of course. I was feeling hungry."

B. "I'm not feeling very hungry now. Maybe later?"

C. Say nothing and shake your head.

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:25:26 No.310223965

>>310223634

nice...

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:26:13 No.310224100

Damn the clueless fags. I knew telling the other girl was a bad choice

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:26:29 No.310224153

>>310223950

>> i have !ASPergErsw 02/18/11(Fri)01:26:29 No.310224155

>>310223950

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:26:32 No.310224159

>>310224100

No shit...

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:27:10 No.310224274

>>310223950

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:27:53 No.310224398

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>>310223950

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:27:58 No.310224410

"I'm not feeling very hungry now. Maybe later?"

You smile at her.

She looks at you, her eyes widening and a frown forming on her face. She looks over at the other woman beside her, who drops what she's doing and looks at you.

"I really do think it is time for you to eat some bread. Don't you think it is time for you to eat some bread? Isn't the bread nice and tasty?"

A. "Of course I will eat some bread. It's always so nice and tasty!"

B. Grab her scissors from her sewing kit and threaten her and the other woman.

>> i have !ASPergErsw 02/18/11(Fri)01:28:32 No.310224514

oh god

fuck it

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:28:51 No.310224566

>>310224410

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:29:18 No.310224636

its a tarp!

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:29:24 No.310224653

>>310224514

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:29:27 No.310224670

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>>310224514

fuck....

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:29:47 No.310224725

>>310224410

We're dropin' the ball /b/ros! A... to stay alive. No one said we had to eat it, pretend!

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:30:07 No.310224778

>>310224514

ohshitisgoingtohitthefan

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:30:27 No.310224836

A for the love of god!!! AAAAAA

>> orbitoolcannoon !!6hkWR8Sgewu 02/18/11(Fri)01:30:42 No.310224876

>>310224410

Don't eat the fucking bread!

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:30:54 No.310224912

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>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:31:11 No.310224972

You push her back away from you and grab the scissors from her sewing kit. The other woman lunges at you, and you stab forward. You see the look of surprise on her face as the scissors enter her stomach.

She tries to scratch at you, and you feel a sting against your face as her nails catch you. You stab again, plunging the scissors back into her stomach, and she drops to the floor.

Everyone is screaming around you. You are naked and there is blood all over your hands. The other woman is running away, and the girl you were with is standing there staring at you, her mouth wide open.

You feel a trickle of blood running down your cheek.

You see the woman from the center of the room running for the door.

A. Take the girl by the hand and run.

B. Chase down the woman and see if she has anything useful on her. She must have a passkey.

C. Try and take one of the sewing ladies hostage.

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:31:18 No.310224996

>>310224514

Facepalm.jpg

Captcha: IQSa; atedick

>> orbitoolcannoon !!6hkWR8Sgewu 02/18/11(Fri)01:31:33 No.310225027

>>310224410

Also who carries bread around in a sewing kit??

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:31:44 No.310225062

>>310224514

I counted this as a "B" because the last thing he said was b...

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:32:10 No.310225128

>>310224876

>Don't eat the fucking bread!

>Don't eat the

>eat

>> i have !ASPergErsw 02/18/11(Fri)01:32:12 No.310225130

b, then a

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:32:24 No.310225166

>>310224972

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:32:28 No.310225177

>>310225027

Read the fucking story. You see the constant feeding?

>> orbitoolcannoon !!6hkWR8Sgewu 02/18/11(Fri)01:32:35 No.310225203

>>310224972

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:32:46 No.310225228

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:32:53 No.310225246

>>310224514

What have youuuu donnnneeeee!!!1

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:33:23 No.310225326

>>310224972

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:34:22 No.310225496

>>310224514

Nigger ruined it all.

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:34:30 No.310225528

You chase after the woman, knocking down people as you go as they run screaming back and forth. The girls seem to have no idea what to do, but the women have all run for the exits.

You launch onto the woman just before she makes it onto the door and knock her to the ground. You jump on her back and growl at her, "Tell me how the fuck to get out of here!" you yell. She looks over her shoulder at you, "Never! Stop this right now!"

A. Hit her in the back of the head until she's unconscious and then take her stuff.

B. Slit her throat and take her stuff.

C. Pick her up and hold the scissors to her throat and push her towards the front door.

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:35:04 No.310225611

>>310225528

C bitch

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:35:15 No.310225648

>>310225528

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:35:15 No.310225652

>> i have !ASPergErsw 02/18/11(Fri)01:35:22 No.310225675

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:35:26 No.310225683

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:35:28 No.310225696

kill her

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:36:26 No.310225855

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>>310225611

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:36:41 No.310225894

Pff good luck holding her hostage ur a 16 yr old cumdumpster

KILL HER!!!

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:37:17 No.310225993

You pull the woman up by the hair and push her toward out the room and towards the front door. As you emerge into the large room with all the lights you see that a number of the women have run up the stairs. Coming from your right you see two men in black work clothing and guns on their belt.

You push the woman towards the front door, the scissors at her throat.

The front doors open, and standing in front of you are three more men in black. They do not go for their guns and merely stand there looking at you.

One of the men behind you say, "Put down the scissors, ma'am. There is no way out of this for you."

A. "I will stab her in the fucking throat if you come near me!"

B. "I will kill every last fucking one of you! Don't come near me!"

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:37:42 No.310226068

Damn. I was really curious what was going to happen at the party but now we won't find out. Instead, main character is going to get caught and killed.

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:38:05 No.310226138

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:38:07 No.310226145

Idea for op:

Please make it that we were actually in paradise and that these fuckers got us kicked out :(

Itt 12 year olds trolls messing up a good story

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:38:08 No.310226149

>>310225993

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:38:12 No.310226158

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:39:44 No.310226419

C: Sit down and cry like the bitch u are and have them stuff ur ugly face with food and liev a happy brainwashed life in the mansion

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:40:01 No.310226462

"I will kill every last fucking one of you! Don't come near me!"

The men laugh at you as you shout at them.

The woman looks at you and then at them. "Please help me," she says to them. "She killed one of the other women... please. I am important here. Please make her drop the scissors!"

You begin to edge for the doorway. The three men stand there unmoving, looking at you.

The man standing behind you laughs. "We are not letting you out no matter what. You may as well just drop the lady."

A. Try to push out through the front door.

B. "Step out of the fucking doorway or she bites it!"

>> i have !ASPergErsw 02/18/11(Fri)01:40:33 No.310226549

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:40:53 No.310226611

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:40:57 No.310226625

>>310226419

This

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:41:48 No.310226781

>>310226462

op you need a fucking voteing system like the first of three or something cause now the storys all fucked also

i pick b

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:42:00 No.310226816

Damn idiots fucked up the store already. Was hoping to at least get to the party.

And seriously? Is that bitch even worth the risk of compromising yourself for =.=

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:42:24 No.310226899

"Step out of the fucking doorway or she bites it!"

The men look at each other. The man behind you speaks. "She's not really all that important. Everyone is replaceable. You may as well just drop her, because she's not going to help you escape."

The woman looks at them and wails, "Please! Please! I am important here! Everyone needs me around here! Don't let her take me away from my girls!"

The men look at each other and laugh again. You hold the scissors menacingly against her neck and look into their eyes.

A. Stab her through the throat and then run for it.

B. Run towards the two men behind you, stab at them, and then run for it.

C. Give up.

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:42:59 No.310227002

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:43:02 No.310227014

C. fuck this shit.

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:43:02 No.310227017

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>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:43:11 No.310227044

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:43:29 No.310227095

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:43:42 No.310227131

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:43:56 No.310227162

yet another good story ruined by a fucktard tripfag

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:44:28 No.310227250

C C C

>> i have !ASPergErsw 02/18/11(Fri)01:44:37 No.310227280

seriously OP, a

at least make the ending interesting

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:44:58 No.310227344

You push the woman forward and away from you and run towards the two men, holding the scissors above your head and screaming.

The first man steps towards you, blocks your downward thrust, and suddenly you are on your back on the floor. You look up to see a needle poking into your neck.

****************

You wake up in the morning and slide out of bed. You groggily place your fleet onto the soft carpet and then stand. You rub your neck and look down to see two red syringe marks. You look around the room and realize that you have no idea where you are, who you are, or how you got here. You look in the mirror to see a beautiful, 16 year old girl with long, red hair, and a stunning, tight body. You have a cute band-aid on your face with a butterfly on it.

The End

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:45:28 No.310227424

GUYS.

HEY GUYS.

GUYS

HE-HEY GUYS.

GUYS.

I think we're going to get the bad ending.

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:45:41 No.310227467

>>310227344

wow, thats it?

fuck this story

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:45:42 No.310227468

And you had your chance at salvation, but missed it.

Sigh. Good story while it lasted though OP

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:45:52 No.310227494

fucking newfags fucking everything up

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:46:05 No.310227532

OP sucks and goes by the first post and not majority vote and lets tripfags ruin a good story

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:46:11 No.310227552

>>310227424

You did not succeed tonight. Just like they didn't succeed at this yesterday.

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:47:10 No.310227724

OP: How much planning goes into this on your part? Are you just winging it or do you have a general outline of the possible plot directions?

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:47:31 No.310227792

>>310227467

If you lose, you lose.

I am going to post yesterday's attempt at escape tonight so people can see it. I will post today's attempt tomorrow. And I will let people try again.

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:47:53 No.310227858

>>310227344

This is why we can't have nice things :/

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:48:19 No.310227933

>>310227724

Yesterday the story came out of nowhere. I just ran with it.

Today's story had to be in the framework of yesterday's, so I had to be more deliberate in terms of what happened to ensure everything from yesterday was taken into account.

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:48:59 No.310228057

New thread?

This time with a poll system?

>> Teku_kun !jyqYhp7Sgg 02/18/11(Fri)01:49:14 No.310228095

>>310205640

I am around from last night, and remember perfectly it ended with her memory erased

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:49:15 No.310228097

I for one thought it was fun and well written even if we fucked up. Ever read Give Yourself Goosebumps? They were awesome and you almost always died

Good job OP

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:49:25 No.310228124

Fuck the person who chose to tell the girl, YOU FUCKED EVERYTHING.

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:49:48 No.310228203

>>310228057

As I have said before, the problem with a poll system is that at the beginning there are very few people playing, and so if I ran a poll system the thread would just die.

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:50:14 No.310228285

>>310227933

Well you kick ass at this, keep it up.

Threads like these are some of the only OC (besides that from /b/ronies) coming out of this board anymore.

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:50:37 No.310228346

>>310228095

And last night she also took a syringe to the neck. Tonight when she woke up she had two syringe holes and a bandaid from where the lady cut her face.

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:50:58 No.310228411

Okay ending, Thank god it was not one of those "and then you woke up" stories. I would have thought that the incident they were talking about last night was one of the staff stepping out of line and then becoming one of the girls. Damn tripfag fucking up the story though.

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:51:21 No.310228484

>>310221087

OP, could you please re-write from here? this was the point where things went down the shitter

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:51:51 No.310228570

Someone needs to make sure all of these get archived somewhere because I feel like I'm gonna miss the ending.

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:52:17 No.310228649

>>310228570

storiesofop.blogspot.com

Every single story I write is in there.

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:53:03 No.310228786

>>310228203

Maybe it could be done in such a way that as the thread gets more posters, the poll quotia is bigger.

AKA, first few minutes, just take the first choice

and as it gets longer, take the three first votes.

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:53:53 No.310228937

>>310228649

Thanks, OP.

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:54:27 No.310229030

>>310228786

That's reasonable... the only issue with that is that I have then have to wait for a few people to post. I will try that next time though.

I know TONS of people have been pissed at some stories because someone starts making all the choices near the end and screws them over. Like the time you got out of the plane before it took off and surrendered to the cops...

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:55:46 No.310229289

Alright, this one didn't take very long... so I will write another one tonight if anyone is interested.

Should I give everyone a continue from this one, or do people want a true random?

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:55:54 No.310229317

great writing OP.

can't wait to see more of these

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:56:26 No.310229407

>>310229289

...hard decision is hard

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:56:56 No.310229507

>>310229289

im leaning towards random

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:57:18 No.310229578

Continue this shit.

Nobody better eat or say anything to anyone

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:57:32 No.310229625

>>310229289

A continue.

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:58:15 No.310229766

>>310229289

continue!

>> Anonymous 02/18/11(Fri)01:59:26 No.310230000

>>310229625

Alright. I am just about to post the no choices version of this story from yesterday, so you can read what happened then (on the site). I will do that now (will take a few minutes), and then I will give everyone a continue opportunity...

The Stories of OP

Friday, February 18, 2011

Where Am I? - Part Two - Unformatted

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