The chair

I opened the door.  You were right on time.  You entered the apartment slowly, with a smile on your face.  "So," you asked, "how's it going?"

I looked at you, in your tight dress, and wrapped my arm around your waist.  "Well, not to be cheesy or anything, but it's going pretty well at the moment now that you're here," I responded with a smile as my hand slid down to your ass.  You playfully batted at my hand with a grin as I squeezed your ass and pulled you close to me. 

I gripped your ass with both hands and held you tight, so that you could feel me, hard, through my pants against you.  "Seems like you are pretty happy to see me," you said with a smile, bringing your hands around my back to pull me closer.  My hand slid up, under your dress, to grip your ass through your panties, satin and tight around your ass.  My hands grabbed the hem of your dress and pulled it up, exposing your black satin panties to my view.  Holding your dress up with one hand, I ran my other hand up the inside of your thighs, feeling the smoothness of your body. 

You gasped softly as you felt my hand brush up against the crotch of your satin panties, pressing yourself tight against me.  I shifted both hands back to the hem of your dress and then pulled, pulling it up and over your shoulders in one swift movement, then letting it fall to the floor beside you.  I looked down at your body, your white bra and black satin underwear, and then my lips descended to your chest.  I licked the tops of your breasts just above the cups of the bra, my tongue moving back and forth along your chest.  Your hands moved to my head and pulled my face tight against your chest.  I nudged aside your bra and grasped one nipple between my lips, licking and sucking on it, making you moan softly.

I then grabbed you by the waist and pushed you gently back into the chair in my living room.  "Mmmm, pushing me around now, are you?" you asked with a sly grin on your face. 

"That's not really the point," I responded, as I held your right wrist tight against the arm of the chair.

"Oh yeah, what's the point?" you asked. 

"This."  With my other hand I pulled a zap-strap from my pocket and quickly wrapped it around your wrist and, before you could respond, tightened it. 

"Hey," you said with a laugh, "what's this about?"

I ignored your question as I grabbed your other wrist, pulled it tight down against the other arm of the chair, and then zap-strapped that one as well.  "Ooooh, it looks like you have my right where you want me," you said to me. 

"Actually, I do," I responded.  I pulled my shirt up and over my head, throwing it on the floor, and then dropped my pants to my ankles and stepped out of them.  My cock was rock hard beneath my boxers as I stepped forward.  "And now that I have you right where I want you, what I want to happen is for you to suck my cock," I told you.  I slid my boxers down and off my legs, stepping out of them and standing in front of you, my cock hard and pointing at your face.  I stood beside you, taking your hair gently in my hands, then pushed your head down gently towards my cock.

You stuck your tongue out to lick the precum from the head with an audible slurping sound.  You looked up at me.  "Tasty."  You then descended upon my cock, your mouth wrapping around the shaft as you sucked my length into your mouth.  I groaned loudly as I looked down at your mouth going to work on me, your hands restricted and bound to the chair.  I thrust forward, meeting the bobbing of your mouth with my hips, pushing my cock deeper into your mouth.  You kept up, taking more of my length as you sucked, covering my length with your saliva.  You looked up at me with lust filled eyes, our eyes meeting as I thrust into your hot, wet mouth.

"That's it, make it sloppy," I said to you as you sucked me.  My cock was covered in your spit, and you were getting it wetter and wetter as you sucked.  Soon there was spit dripping down my length and onto my balls and dripping down your chin to fall onto your breasts.  I reached down and grabbed your nipples with my fingers, tugging on them as you sucked me, making you moan softly around my length.  My cock slipped out of your mouth as I stopped directing your face with my hands, slapping back and forth, wet, against your cheeks before you managed to latch onto it again with your lips.  I thrust forward again, making you squirm in your chair as my cock filled your mouth. 

I pulled my cock from your mouth, rubbing it along your face as I presented my balls to your lips.  You began to lick them, then sucked one of them into your mouth, then the other.  I moaned loudly as you tongued my balls, "That's it.  That's right baby."  I rubbed my wet cock against your face and smeared your makeup with my precum and your spittle as you licked me.  I grabbed your face and tilted it up so that our eyes met as you licked my balls, looking into your eyes and seeing the lust and frustration you felt tied to the chair. 

"Would you rather I fucked you than teased you?" I asked you.

"Mmmm, what do you think?" you responded.

I rubbed my cock against your lips again.  You opened your mouth to suck me down, but I pulled back, leaving you there with your mouth open and your tongue out.  "I think what you want is for me to pull those pretty panties off and fuck you now."

"You know that's what I want," you responded with a shiver, rubbing your thighs together.  I reached down, sliding my fingers into the waistband of your panties and then down to your wet pussy.  I began to gently massage your sopping pussy lips with two fingers, bringing forth a long, low moan from your lips. 

"You're soaking," I said.  You responded by latching back onto my hard cock with your lips, sucking it back into your mouth.  I thrust forward again, this time with more insistence, pushing my cock between your wet lips and into your mouth as I rubbed you.  I began to maneuver a finger inside of you, making you moan louder and suck harder on my cock, your mouth bobbing up and down with increasing speed.  With my finger inside, I began to slide it in and out in time with the thrusts of my hips, making you buck against me. 

I pulled back out of your mouth, stepping back and removing my finger from your wet hole.  You moaned loudly again, frustrated and rubbing your thighs together as I removed the stimulation of my finger.  "Fuck!  Will you just fuck me already?" you asked me.

"That's what I was waiting to hear, pretty girl," I said with a laugh.  "Why don't you say it again, just to make sure I really know what you want?"

You groaned loudly, threw your head back, and practically shouted, "Just fuck me.  Just fucking fill me up with your cock.  Please!" 

I grabbed your panties by the waistband and slid them down your smooth thighs and then off your feet, flinging them away and onto the floor.  I pushed the chair up against a wall and then put your feet over my shoulders, exposing you directly to my hard cock, your ass tilted up against the seat of the chair.  You gasped as I took charge, wriggling and jerking against your restraints as I leaned on you, my body pressed against yours. 

My face was inches from yours as I took my cock in my right hand and began to rub it back and forth against the entrance to your hole.  You gasped as you felt the head of my cock against you and tried to push yourself down against me, but you could barely move bound to the chair with the zap-straps.  I continued to rub the head of my cock back and forth against you as you moaned.  I leaned over, kissed your ear softly, and then asked again, "Do you want me to fuck you now?"

"Fuck," you gasped, "of course I can.  Please, just go ahead and do it."

I slowly thrust forward, sinking just the head into your warm pussy first.  I held there for a few moments as you whined, struggling in your restraints to try and force me further inside of you, and then fell forward and filled you in one thrust.  "Oh fuck," you called out as you felt my full length enter you.  I wrapped my arms around your legs over my shoulders and began to thrust, slowly drawing back and then slowly pushing forward again, savouring the feeling of my shaft filling you. 

I continued to fuck you slowly, drawing all the way back and then pushing my hips forward until my body collided with yours, making the chair slam back against the wall with every thrust.  Every movement brought another moan from your lips.  Without the ability to move your hands, I felt your teeth dig into my shoulder as I fucked you.  I began to move faster, increasing the pace of my thrusting as you struggled against your bonds and nibbled my shoulder and neck. 

"Do you like that?" I asked you. 

"Fuck, shut up and fuck me," you responded, trying to meet my thrusts with your own body.  I reached one hand down to rub your clit with my thumb, making you moan even louder.  I started fucking you faster and harder as I massaged your clit, feeling your pussy clamp down on me and tighten as you moaned loudly in my ear. 

"Oh... fuck... that's fucking good," you moaned as I drilled you.  I moaned loudly as I felt your pussy clamp down on my cock as I fucked you, in turn increasing the speed and force of my thrusts.  Your breasts were shaking in your bra as I fucked you, your entire body quivering as you struggled in the chair.

"Fuck, I just want to touch myself... just fucking let my hand free," you moaned as I fucked you.

"No," I responded, as I increased the speed of my thumb rubbing against your clit.  You moaned even louder, your moans and gasps becoming more and more frequent as I fucked you. 

"Don't you just love being tied there on the chair like that?"

"Yes!  Yes!  Just fuck me!  Fuck me!"

I slammed forward again, and I could feel you begin to orgasm beneath me, your body shaking and your teeth digging into my shoulder with increased force.  Your pussy clamped down and tightened on me as I held myself inside of you, slowing the pace of my thrusts.  I rode you through your orgasm, keeping my thrusts slow until I felt you begin to calm.  Then I began to slam forward again, fucking you at full speed and with full force. 

"Oh fuuuuuuck!" you screamed, as the sudden thrusting made you explode into orgasm again, your body thrashing violently on the chair as I fucked you.  I could feel my own orgasm building in my balls, feeling my body tighten as I fucked you. 

"You're going to make me cum," I gasped into your ear. 

"Ugh... fuck... I'm all yours," you gasped out between moans.  I pulled out, jerking my cock rapidly in my hand, and placed the head back against your lips, covered in your pussy juices.  You sucked it deep into your mouth just as I began to cum, filling your mouth with my load.  "Fuck!" I called out as I emptied myself into your mouth, my body shaking.  You swallowed loudly, but even so some of my cum dribbled from between your lips and down your chin.  I gasped, spent, and fell back from your mouth into the other chair.

 

We were both sweating.  You smiled at me, your eyes twinkling.  "So, you going to let me out of this chair now, or what?"

A couple of comments on writing style

There is no guide to how to write a live choose your own adventure story; it is a relatively modern concept that, as far as I can tell, is only possible as a result of current technology.  When I was a teenager I read those choose your own adventure stories where you had the option to add to the story once you reached the end of your branch.  While those were interesting, the downside was that they were not live.  Collaboration is often significantly more enjoyable when live.

So while there is no guide as to how to write these stories, I have been doing this for a reasonable amount of time and am comfortable with my approach.

I generally start with no intent, unless the story is linked to another one or has a stated theme.  For example, when I write a zombie story I know that it will include zombies, but I know nothing else.

The main character develops as an individual as the story progresses.  As the story opens, I know nothing about them.  As the main character chooses different paths, they develop as an individual and their potential actions become constrained.  A character who chooses to wear slutty clothes from the outset will always have the option of taking slutty actions.  A character who is consistently non-violent, even in the face of violent options, will tend to have less and less violent options as time goes by.

I also take hints from people who make comments.  If all they want is the chance to purchase a Snickers bar, then if there is an option to take one I'll try to make it happen.  I try not to go out of my way to include the desires of every individual, but if it's something that can be worked into the story, then I treat it as if the subconscious of the character was represented in the comments.  The character itself is always a representation of the collective thoughts of the participating individuals in response to the situation the character has been placed, or has managed to place themselves in.

From time to time people complain that I have written the character into a corner, or that I have not provided sufficient options.  To a certain extent this is the responsibility of the writer.  I choose how the environment responds to the actions of the character.  I try not to screw too much with the environment though.  In many stories (not all), the challenge faced by the main character results from their actions, not from a predicament the character was placed in.  Generally, where I have placed the main character in a predicament myself it is at the outset of the story.  The Sunday Crime Trilogy, the Where Am I? series (although in both of these cases I did not know the predicament myself at the outset, but I certainly wrote the predicament in without regard for the actions of the character) and all of the zombie stories are examples where the challenge is placed on the main character.

In truth, I often find these stories more enjoyable than completely open-ended stories.  Sarah and Chris was one of my favourite open-ended stories.  The risk with open-ended stories is that the predicament the character ends up in is not necessarily the most exciting.

When I look at David and my brother, the character fluctuated between a desire for her brother and a desire for David.  I called the story David and my brother because in reality the story was more about her feelings for the two of them, and her reaction to them, than it was about the people they fought and the resulting violence.  Some of that is missing from the no choices version of the story though, because, as I said, to me the comments of participants to a certain extent are like the subconscious of the character.  What you do not get from the no choices version of the story is that many of the choices made by the character were motivated by desire to see her brother, rather than anything else.  And yet in the end, after their fighting, she rejected both of them.

I like writing these.  Hope you (whoever you are) continues to enjoy reading them.

David and my brother - No Choices

It's early in the morning.  You stand, examining yourself in the mirror.  You are a blonde, white girl. You are 16 years old, and you stand there, admiring your fit body and small breasts in the mirror, grinning at yourself. You run your hands up your white thighs, stopping to gently touch the soft, smooth skin between your legs. Waxing was painful, but so worth it for the look.

After examining yourself in the mirror you decide it is time to get ready to face the day. You head over to your closet and consider what outfit you should wear.  You decide to wear something slutty. You first pull on a pair of black, lacy panties. They barely cover anything, and you begin to get moist just thinking about the trouble you can get into wearing them...

You then pull on a short skirt that barely covers your ass. You finish off the outfit with a tight, white half-top, with the word "/bitch" written across the front. Dressed, you head downstairs to face the day. 

Your brother looks at you as you walk into the kitchen. "Wow... nice outfit, sis," he says with a laugh. He's 20 and is going to university.  You look at him, shake your head, and give him the finger. "Go fuck yourself, big brother," you say as you head out the front door. 

You take public transit to school in the morning, so you walk the two blocks from your house stop to the bus stop by yourself. There are three people waiting at the bus stop. Two of them go to school with you, a younger girl, Megan, and a senior, David. David is an absolute geek and a loser, whereas you do chat with Megan from time to time. The other person at the bus stop is an old lady who never says anything.

You see David eyeing you up as you arrive, staring at your breasts in the tight half-top.  "Fuck off, David," you say to him as you see him staring at your breasts through your top. He swallows hard and turns away, embarrassed that he was caught. You laugh at him as he pulls into the corner of the bus stop, trying to hide the erection that has formed in his jeans. 

Megan giggles to herself but says nothing to either of you. Within a minute or so the bus arrives. Megan gets on first, and then you follow her, giving David a view of your ass in the tight skirt as you get onboard. 

You look around the bus to decide where to sit.  You sit down by yourself near the front of the bus. 

David sits down beside you. You sigh to yourself. "What the fuck do you want, David?" you ask him angrily.

"Ummm, I just wanted to sit beside you. You know, I see you every day, and... you're really pretty and all."

"I know I'm really pretty, David. That's why I wouldn't talk to a geeky loser like you."

You can see his erection still straining at his pants. "Isn't there anything I can do to make you see that I'm a good guy?" he asks pleadingly.

"Just get the fuck away from me, or I'll yell that you are touching me!" you say to him. 

He looks at you and grabs your shoulder, "Look, I just want to talk to you and-"

"He is trying to touch me! He's trying to rape me!" you scream at the top of your lungs. You begin pushing David away from you, and he begins blubbering about the fact that he loves you.

Suddenly a guy from the back of the bus grabs David by the shirt and pulls him away. He grabs David and smashes his face into a poll, sending David falling to the ground. Two other guys jump on David and begin kicking him.

"Get off the bus, now!" the bus driver begins yelling at all of you. He slams on the breaks and the doors open. The guys grab David and pull him off the bus. 

"That means you too, missy!" he calls over the intercom, looking at you.  You walk up to the bus driver and begin pleading with him. "Please, it wasn't my fault," you begin to say, wringing some tears from your eyes. 

He looks at you, stares at your shirt and your tits, and then back at you. "You asked for it, girl, now get off my bus." You sigh and get off the bus, stepping out into the sunlight. 

The three guys have David down at the side of the road and they are beating on him. His face looks bloody, and he is screaming at them to stop. 

Ignoring the pleas of David, you pull out your cell and phone your brother.

"Hey bro. Yeah, I got kicked off the bus... I'm only like three blocks away. Can you get me a ride?"

You hear him curse. "Fine. I'll be right there, sis," he responds. 

You stand there at the side of the road in your short skirt and half-top and begin to feel vulnerable as you watch David take his beating. The three guys beating on him are all white guys who go to your school. One of them calls out to you, "Hey, slut, aren't you going to thank us for taking care of this geek?"

He begins to walk towards you, away from David. "Don't we deserve some kind of reward for saving you? Or are you too much of a bitch for that?"

"What kind of reward would you want?" you ask him with a smile. He looks at you and grins. He looks back at the guys still beating on David, then over at the woods. He's tall, with brown hair and dark eyes. You think that he's on the football team, because you have seen him around in his jersey sometimes. 

"How about you come with me into the woods?" he says, taking you by the hand. Your palm is sweaty as he pulls you away from the road and into the woods. He grabs your hand and pushes it down to his crotch. You can feel that he is hard through his pants. He looks you in the eyes and smiles. "Ready to open wide, girl?"

You know that your brother should be there soon. You give the boy a quick kiss on the cheek, then pull your hand away and turn to head back to the street. He grabs you by the arm before you can get anywhere and pulls you back. 

"Hey!" you shout at him.

Then you feel his hand gripping your jaw. You try to protest, but he grabs you by the shoulder and pushes you down onto your knees in front of him. He wraps one hand around your throat, holding tightly. You try to shout, but you cannot say anything. You look to your right and see that the two other guys have come into the woods who were with him, and then you are surrounded.

They grab you by the arms, and one of them pulls your half-top up and over your head. 

You feel your arms pulled tight, and then there is a cock pressed against your face, the head rubbing back and forth against your lips.  You open your mouth, letting the head of the cock slide inside. And then you bite down with every ounce of force you can muster. You feel blood in your mouth, and you hear a scream. The guy in front of you punches you in the face, sending you falling back onto the ground. You spit blood from your mouth, but before you can move you feel fists pounding against you. You try to cover your head as the guys begin to kick and punch you. 

"You fucking slut! I'm going to fucking kill you!" screams one of the guys. You try to move to fight them, but a boot slams into your chest and you are left pulling yourself into a ball as they beat on you. 

You look up briefly to see the boy you bit grabbing at his cock, blood pouring through his fingers. 

Suddenly you hear a shout of rage, and one of the boys falls to the ground. You look up to see your brother holding a crowbar and standing over you.  "Run, sis!" he shouts.

You scramble through the leaves to stand. Your brother is swinging the crowbar at one of the other guys, but you turn and begin to run back towards the street. You hear sounds of fighting and screaming from behind you as you sprint from the scene.

You arrive at your brother's truck, still topless, panting. Your skirt has ridden up and your ass is showing. You are bruised, and there is blood pouring from a cut on the side of your head. 

You grab at the passenger side door, but the car is locked. You turn back towards the woods, and there stands the guy whose cock you bit. He has shoved his bleeding cock into his pants and looks dazed. But when he sees you he screams in rage and rushes towards you.

You swing wildly at his face, but he dodges and then catches you in the stomach with his fist. You double over in pain, falling to your knees in front of him. You try to rise, but his knee hits you in the jaw, sending your head slamming back against the car door. 

You feel his bloody hands wrap around your throat. You look up into the sunlight to see him kneeling on your chest trying to choke the life out of you. Suddenly his head smashes into the side of the door. Standing there, above you, is David. 

He is screaming in rage, kicking and punching at the guy who was assaulting you. "Don't you ever fucking touch her!" he's shouting. 

The guy manages to roll away from David, and then stands and begins to run down the street. David kneels at your side and brushes the hair from your face. 

"Are you alright? Are you okay?" 

"You... have to save my brother, David," you whisper to him from between gasps. 

"Anything for you," he responds. You gesture towards the woods, and then off David goes, running at full speed. You shelter yourself behind the car from the vehicles passing by on the street. You feel like you can barely breathe. 

Within a minute or two, David and your brother emerge from the woods. The crowbar is covered in blood and bits of hair. 

"Sis!" your brother shouts. He rushes over to you and kneels down beside you. "We have to get her to the hospital," he says to David.  "No, just take me home," you say to your brother. David owns the back door to the car, and then your brother gingerly lifts you and places you in the back seat. He throws the crowbar down in front of you. David gets in the back seat with you. He pulls off his shirt and begins wiping the blood from your wounds as your brother starts the car.

Your brother speeds down the street back to the house as David gingerly tries to clean your wounds. You cough, some blood bubbling from your lips. 

"I fucking bit him," you say to David with a smile.

"I saw... I saw," David says, trying to calm you.

Your brother opens the back door when you get back to the house and David picks you up, shirtless, to carry you inside.

Your brother leads David up the stairs and to the bathroom. Your brother turns on the water. 

You feel your brother's hands on your hips as he pulls your skirt off of you. 

"First we have to get you cleaned up," he says, caring and concern in his eyes. You feel his hands on your ass, and then your black panties come down and off, falling to the floor. 

David takes you by the hand, his clothes still on, and pulls you into the shower. The water is hot, and you shriek as it hits your wounds. You close your eyes as you feel someone's hands run over your body, rubbing the wounds with soap. 

You feel fingers slide over your nipples and you moan softly. You feel someone rubbing their hands against your thighs where blood is trickling down your thigh and you reach down, holding their hand tightly. 

You open your eyes, seeing David staring into your eyes, shirtless. Your brother is kneeling down beside the shower, rubbing you with soap. 

You moan softly to yourself as you feel their hands all over you. You begin to get excited, and you know that this can't possibly happen. Not this way. 

"Umm, I'm okay now. Can you both let me finish getting clean?" you say to them. They both seem to snap out of it. "Of course." "Yeah, no prob, sis."

They both stand and get out of the room, David soaking wet. 

You sigh, gently rubbing yourself as the door closes behind them. You clean off the last of your wounds and then step out of the shower and turn off the water. There is nothing to wear but a robe, so you pull it on. 

You step out into the hallway. You can hear David and your brother talking downstairs.

You head back to your room and get dressed. In a hurry, you just pull on a pair of jeans and a t-shirt. You have had enough of looking like a slut for the day, as it's only gotten you into trouble.

You head downstairs as you hear David and your brother talking. 

"We have to go back and take care of the bodies," your brother is arguing.

"No, we need to find the other guy and get rid of him first. Then we can deal with everything all at once," David responds. 

You step into the room and they go silent. David is standing there, shirtless. His body is not actually all that bad, and the cut on his lip makes him look like a bit of a badass. 

"You... you fucking killed them?" you ask.

Your brother nods slowly. 

"We need to find the last one and kill him then," you say to them coldly. 

They look at each other in surprise. "Alright... well, how do you propose we do that?"

"Well, we know he won't have gone to the hospital with a cock bite... so he will have gone home. And we can just look in the yearbook, given he's on the football team, find his name, then look him up." 

David nods. "Yeah, he'll show up in last year's yearbook as on the team."

Within a few minutes you have found his name, and then his home address. Your brother looks at you. "So who goes?"

You lean forward and wrap your arms around David. "David, I want to thank you for what you have done for me," you whisper in his ear.

You can almost hear his swallow. You giggle to yourself. You kiss his ear softly. You then trail your kiss back down to his lips, pecking gently against them. 

"Don't you want to kiss me, David?" you ask him with a smile. He responds by wrapping his arms around you and pulling you into him, his mouth covering yours. He kisses you deeply, his tongue sliding into your mouth. You kiss him back, your tongues playing together. You feel him push you back onto the kitchen table. 

He stands between your spread legs, and you can feel his hard cock pressed against the inside of your thigh through your jeans. You reach down and grab at it, making him gasp in pleasure.

You push David back and then slide down to your knees in front of him. You unbuckle his pants, look up at him, smile, and then pull his pants and boxers down.

His cock stands up hard and proud in front of him, precum glistening on the top. You lower your mouth and gently kiss the head of his cock. You feel him gasp as your lips touch the head.

You then slide as much as you can into your mouth in one movement, his cock pushing deep. He gasps and grips the counter, falling back against it. You begin to bob your head up and down on his cock, loving the feeling of it sliding into your mouth. 

You swirl your tongue around his length as you do, and he moans loudly. 

You continue to bob your head up and down on his cock, increasing the pace as he begins to thrust forward. You grip the base of his cock as you suck, keeping him from pushing too far into your mouth.

You look up and can see in his eyes that he is going to explode soon. You grab his balls with your free hand and begin to rub them. You pull your mouth briefly off his cock. "You want to cum in my mouth, David?" He just moans in response.

You descend back onto his cock, sucking it deep into your mouth. You feel him twitch, and then again, and then his load is filling your mouth. Some escapes from between your lips, but you swallow as much as you can. 

You pull off his cock once his spent, some cum dribbling down your chin. "Nice?" 

He just groans. You stand up, leaving David standing there, dazed, and grab your phone from the table. You look and realize that you have missed a call. It was on vibrate. Your brother had called. A few minutes ago. You begin to dial your brother back when he walks back into the room. He is covered in blood. 

He sees the two of you, David with his cock out, and you with cum dripping down your chin, and his eyes widen. 

"What the fuck is going on here?" he shouts.

"Who cares? What happened?" you ask him. 

"I just fucking killed someone for you, and you went around and just sucked some fucking guy's cock?" he responds. David is busy trying to shove his cock back into his pants when your brother's fist catches him in the face. David falls to the ground. Your brother begins to kick David in the stomach. 

"You took advantage of my sister when she was fucked you, you piece of shit!" he shouts.

He is kicking David again and again, and David cannot even get off the floor to fight back.

"You stupid beta little fuck!" David shouts.

You grab your phone from the table, watching your brother beating on David, and then just walk out the door. It slams behind you. 

You see that your brother has left his car parked in the driveway with the keys inside. He must have thought something was wrong when you didn't pick up his call.

You get in the driver's seat. The crowbar is sitting in the passenger seat, covered in blood.

You begin to drive to the mall. You have no idea what you're doing, but you just drive. You shake your head, wondering why at least three people are now dead, possibly a fourth. 

You are heading towards the mall when a cop car pulls up behind you. He flashes his lights. You realize that you are driving your brother's car and you have no idea what happened at the other guy's house. 

Your fingers tighten on the wheel.

The cop turns on his sirens as you hit the gas. There is an intersection up ahead, and there are cars piling up behind the red light in front of you.

You swerve into the oncoming traffic lane, the cop following you. You hit the gas as you head towards the intersection, praying. 

Just before you hit the intersection, you grip the wheel tightly, your heat leaping into your throat. You make it through. You look in the rearview mirror and see a car plow into the cop car, sending it spinning and into a wall.

Holy fuck. 

The phone is ringing. It's your brother.

"Why the fuck am I being chased by the cops?" you say as you pick up.

"Someone must have seen me. Quick, come back to pick me up!"

"No, brother, I'm not going to come pick you up. You're on your own!" you shout back. You pull the car over to the side of the road. You look at the crowbar sitting there, shudder, then get out of the vehicle. 

You begin to walk down the street away from the car. Your phone rings again. It's David. You can tell from the caller ID. But how the fuck did he get your number? 

You answer. "Are you alright?" you ask him.

"Yeah, I managed to get away from your brother. I'm on my way home right now. You need somewhere to stay?"

"You're on your own with this one, David," you say to him. "You helped a killer. I just almost got raped. Enjoy." You hang up the phone.

You call your friend Tina. "What do you want, babe? I'm in class?"

"Come pick me up and take me to your place. Had a totally fucked up day."

"Babe, I'm in class."

"Just fucking come pick me up," you begin to sob over the phone. 

"Okay, okay. Where are you? Okay, I'm on my way."

You sit at the side of the road, tears in your eyes, as you wait for Tina to arrive. Finally she pulls up in her beater car. You get inside.

"What the hell is going on?" she asks you.

"Just take me to your house. Please. Please!" Tina agrees, and she drives you to her house in silence.

The two of you get out of the car and she leads you up to her room. Tina has an amazing collection of shoes. You sit down and begin going through her closet, trying to forget about what happened as you look through her collection. 

You turn to Tina, holding up a pair of red shoes. "These are beautiful!" 

Tina looks at you and puts her hand on your shoulder. "You need to tell me what happened. Please. I'm your friend."

You lean forward and pull her into a hug. She responds by pulling you close and wrapping her arms around you. You pull back slightly and brush your lips against hers. She pulls back.

"What are you doing?" she asks.

You giggle and then try to kiss her again. She pushes you away. "What is wrong with you today?" she asks you.

"What's wrong with you? Why do you have to keep asking me that?" you shout in response.

"I'm your friend! I want to know what's going on!"

"If you're my friend then you should accept me and comfort me!" You lean forward and try to kiss her again. She slaps you in the face. 

"What the fuck is wrong with you? Get out of my fucking house!" she shouts. You look at her. You can feel the rage building in you. She's not a good friend. She's just someone who's pretending. She just wanted to act like a friend... she never really cared about you.

What the hell is wrong with her? Why did she even bother to pick you up?

You hit her in the face as hard as you can. Tina goes reeling backwards. "You stupid bitch!" you shout at her. The feeling that has built up throughout the day flows through you and you launch yourself at her.

Her foot catches you in the chest, and you are sent reeling back. Tina, who has not been beaten already this day, stands and pushes you out the door to her room and slams the door behind her. "Get the fuck out of my house!" she shouts at you. "I'm calling the cops on you! Get out of my house you stupid bitch!"

Fuck.

You can hear her on the phone as you look around the house for something to break down the door. You see a guitar amplifier in the living room and you grab it. You walk back to the door. You can hear her on the phone inside, and you begin to smash at the door.

"Get off the fucking phone, Tina!" you shout. 

She screams back at you. "The cops are on their way, you bitch." You smash forward with all your might, and the door collapses inward.

"Get the fuck off the phone!" you shout at her as you jump at her. She tries to kick you again, but this time you dodge. You knock her to the ground and begin to hit her in the face. You grab her by the hair and smash her head against the ground. You smash her again and again, looking into her eyes as blood begins to pour from the back of her skull.

"You stupid fucking bitch! You bitch! Why did you do this to me?"

You hear sirens in the distance.

You smash Tina's head into the ground again and again. You hold onto her hair tightly as you beat her against the floor. You can feel the rage flowing through you. Fuck those rapists. And fuck your brother for hitting David. And fuck David for being suck a pussy. 

She's not moving anymore. You look down and see that her eyes are lifeless. Your hands are covered in blood. Tears are pouring down your face. 

"Stop!" you hear. You look over your shoulder and two police officers have their pistols trained on you.

Tears are pouring down your face. You stand up and face them. "It wasn't my fault... it wasn't my fault!"

"She attacked me! I phoned you! That's my phone!" you begin to tell them. One of them steps forward.

"Get down on your knees... now!"

You kneel down in front of him. You look up at him as he goes to put the cuffs on you. "I'm telling you. It wasn't me. It wasn't my fault. It wasn't my fault!"

He steps behind you, his hand still on his pistol.

He steps behind you and you turn, grabbing at his gun hand as he moves towards his cuffs. You move your head out of the way and then try to direct his gun towards his partner. He pushes you onto the ground, and then the gun goes off. 

You don't see where the round goes. But the the trigger is squeezed and another round goes off. The sound is loud in your ear. The cop rolls you over, and the two of you land on Tina's body. You scream. "Get off me, you piece of shit!"

You try to grab his gun away from him, but he is too strong. You're just a girl. You are screaming at him as you struggle. A shadow covers you, and the other cop is standing over the two of you. 

You see blood pouring from his stomach. You see the knuckles on his fingers as he grips his pistol, pointing it at you. You see his finger move to squeeze. Why did it have to

The End

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  Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)00:48:43 No.351399350 

You pick "A" or "B" and then I write the next section of the story. It's that simple.

It's early in the morning. You are:

A. A blonde white girl, 16 years old, with small breasts and a fit body.

B. A male teen, 16 years old, somewhat geeky looking, but not entirely unattractive. White, of course.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)00:49:57 No.351399567

>>351399350

Voting based on best two out of three if multiple voters. If it appears there is only one voter I will just take the first vote.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)00:50:28 No.351399662

>>351399567

Archive of past choose your own adventure stories from /b/: http://storiesofop.blogspot.com

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)00:52:08 No.351399962

A

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)00:52:14 No.351399978

Waiting for the first vote...

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)00:53:58 No.351400291

You stand and examine yourself in the mirror. You are a blonde, white girl. You are 16 years old, and you admire your fit body and small breasts in the mirror. You run your hands up your white thighs, stopping to gently touch the soft, smissingnoh skin between your legs. Waxing was painful, but so worth it for the look.

After examining yourself in the mirror you decide it is time to get ready to face the day. You head over to your closet and consider what outfit you should wear.

A. Slutty. Short skirt, with a tight half-top that just screams you want cock.

B. Something conservative. A pretty blue sun dress that your grandmother gave you.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)00:54:58 No.351400439

A

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)00:55:40 No.351400542

I'll just leave this here http://JustJB.com/3AK9Z9

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)00:56:19 No.351400649

A

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)00:57:04 No.351400776

You decide to wear something slutty. You first pull on a pair of black, lacy panties. They barely cover anything, and you begin to get moist just thinking about the trouble you can get into wearing them...

You then pull on a short skirt that barely covers your ass. You finish off the outfit with a tight, white half-top, with the word "/bitch" written across the front. Dressed, you head downstairs to face the day.

Your brother looks at you as you walk into the kitchen. "Wow... nice outfit, sis," he says with a laugh. He's 20 and is going to university.

A. Stop to chat with your brother.

B. Give him the finger and head outside to catch the bus.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)00:58:11 No.351400980

A

>inb4 incest

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)00:58:36 No.351401048

hmm... this is tough...

I think B.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)00:58:52 No.351401094

Need a tiebreaking vote...

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)00:59:06 No.351401140

No incest. I choose B.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)00:59:21 No.351401179

Please a

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)00:59:42 No.351401237

B

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:00:24 No.351401348

>>351399350

a

a

a

a

a

a

then b

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:01:13 No.351401485

You look at him, shake your head, and give him the finger. "Go fuck yourself, big brother," you say as you head out the front door.

You take public transit to school in the morning, so you walk the two blocks from your house stop to the bus stop by yourself. There are three people waiting at the bus stop. Two of them go to school with you, a younger girl, Megan, and a senior, David. David is an absolute geek and a loser, whereas you do chat with Megan from time to time. The other person at the bus stop is an old lady who never says anything.

You see David eyeing you up as you arrive, staring at your breasts in the tight half-top.

A. "Fuck off, David."

B. "Hey Megan, how's it going?"

C. Say nothing.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:01:23 No.351401512

a

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:01:41 No.351401557

A.

>>             anon !!mLUnXUO5L0V 09/03/11(Sat)01:01:43 No.351401563

>>351401485

a

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:01:55 No.351401588

A.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:02:15 No.351401628

b

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:02:41 No.351401698

c

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:03:23 No.351401797

d

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:03:31 No.351401819

"Fuck off, David," you say to him as you see him staring at your breasts through your top. He swallows hard and turns away, embarrassed that he was caught. You laugh at him as he pulls into the corner of the bus stop, trying to hide the erection that has formed in his jeans.

Megan giggles to herself but says nothing to either of you. Within a minute or so the bus arrives. Megan gets on first, and then you follow her, giving David a view of your ass in the tight skirt as you get onboard.

You look around the bus to decide where to sit.

A. Sit beside Megan.

B. Sit in an empty seating area.

C. Sit at the back of the bus where the cool kids normally hang out. There are a few boys there right now.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:04:21 No.351401933

>>351401819

B.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:04:28 No.351401954

a

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:04:56 No.351402026

C

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:05:03 No.351402056

>>351401954

>>351401933

Need tiebreaker...

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:05:48 No.351402156

B.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:05:49 No.351402157

>>351399350

B

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:05:51 No.351402168

>>351402026

Still not a tiebreaker...

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:07:27 No.351402403

c

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:07:37 No.351402435

You sit down by yourself near the front of the bus.

David sits down beside you. You sigh to yourself. "What the fuck do you want, David?" you ask him angrily.

"Ummm, I just wanted to sit beside you. You know, I see you everyday, and... you're really pretty and all."

"I know I'm really pretty, David. That's why I wouldn't talk to a geeky loser like you."

You can see his erection still straining at his pants. "Isn't there anything I can do to make you see that I'm a good guy?" he asks pleadingly.

A. "I want you to get into a fight for me, David."

B. "Do you have any money you want to give me, David?"

C. "Just get the fuck away from me, or I'll yell that you are touching me!"

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:07:37 No.351402436

A fuckers

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:08:37 No.351402561

>>351402435

C.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:08:45 No.351402581

>>351402436

One vote for David fighting...

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:08:47 No.351402589

B

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:08:56 No.351402610

C

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:09:10 No.351402642

>>351402435

D, suck his cock

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:09:10 No.351402643

>>351402435

A. wanna see if he can kick a roody-poo's ass

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:09:46 No.351402728

C.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:10:12 No.351402799

a fight we must have A

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:10:14 No.351402805

>>351399350

Why do we have to be Caucasians? I want to put myself in the shoes of a Mexican, for once.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:11:03 No.351402944

"Just get the fuck away from me, or I'll yell that you are touching me!" you say to him.

He looks at you and grabs your shoulder, "Look, I just want to talk to you and-"

"He is trying to touch me! He's trying to rape me!" you scream at the top of your lungs. You begin pushing David away from you, and he begins blubbering about the fact that he loves you.

Suddenly a guy from the back of the bus grabs David by the shirt and pulls him away. He grabs David and smashes his face into a poll, sending David falling to the ground. Two other guys jump on David and begin kicking him.

"Get off the bus, now!" the bus driver begins yelling at all of you. He slams on the breaks and the doors open. The guys grab David and pull him off the bus.

"That means you too, missy!" he calls over the intercom, looking at you.

A. Get off the bus.

B. Walk up to him and try to plead your case.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:11:43 No.351403055

>>351402805

http://storiesofop.blogspot.com/2011/02/julio-spic-no-choices.html

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:11:56 No.351403085

>>351402944

A.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:12:13 No.351403130

>>351402944

B. I'm not about to WALK to school... That's for losers

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:12:40 No.351403198

B

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:13:11 No.351403278

A, get off and watch the beating, get off on it later

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:13:14 No.351403291

>>351402944

B please

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:14:19 No.351403466

You walk up to the bus driver and begin pleading with him. "Please, it wasn't my fault," you begin to say, wringing some tears from your eyes.

He looks at you, stares at your shirt and your tits, and then back at you. "You asked for it, girl, now get off my bus." You sigh and get off the bus, stepping out into the sunlight.

The three guys have David down at the side of the road and they are beating on him. His face looks bloody, and he is screaming at them to stop.

A. Run up and intervene on David's behalf.

B. Join in on the beating. David's a loser.

C. Call your brother and ask for a ride the rest of the way to school.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:14:57 No.351403553

c

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:15:11 No.351403583

C. I want incest to happen. And this seems like a gateway.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:15:34 No.351403644

C

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:15:48 No.351403670

>>351403466

c

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:15:53 No.351403678

A, i feel bad for the kid.

>>            Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:16:08 No.351403734

>>351403466

C

incest time

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:16:23 No.351403776

>>351403678

Fuck you, candy-ass

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:17:15 No.351403921

You pull out your cell and phone your brother.

"Hey bro. Yeah, I got kicked off the bus... I'm only like three blocks away. Can you get me a ride?"

You hear him curse. "Fine. I'll be right there, sis," he responds.

You stand there at the side of the road in your short skirt and half-top and begin to feel vulnerable as you watch David take his beating. The three guys beating on him are all white guys who go to your school. One of them calls out to you, "Hey, slut, aren't you going to thank us for taking care of this geek?"

He begins to walk towards you, away from David. "Don't we deserve some kind of reward for saving you? Or are you too much of a bitch for that?"

A. "Just stay away from me. My brother is on his way!"

B. "What kind of reward would you want."

C. Run.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:17:33 No.351403959

B godDAMN IT

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:18:10 No.351404067

A.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:18:30 No.351404118

B

>>             Deranker !hQiBUENOxU 09/03/11(Sat)01:18:44 No.351404160

/b/

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:18:54 No.351404185

a

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:18:55 No.351404187

>>351403921

B

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:18:58 No.351404196

B

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:19:28 No.351404275

>>351399350

A

>>             Deranker !hQiBUENOxU 09/03/11(Sat)01:20:28 No.351404424

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>>351404275

a little late there, champ

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:20:28 No.351404425

"What kind of reward would you want?" you ask him with a smile. He looks at you and grins. He looks back at the guys still beating on David, then over at the woods. He's tall, with brown hair and dark eyes. You think that he's on the football team, because you have seen him around in his jersey sometimes.

"How about you come with me into the woods?" he says, taking you by the hand. Your palm is sweaty as he pulls you away from the road and into the woods. He grabs your hand and pushes it down to his crotch. You can feel that he is hard through his pants. He looks you in the eyes and smiles. "Ready to open wide, girl?"

A. Kneel down and suck his cock.

B. Your brother is almost here. Give him a kiss and head back to the street.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:21:09 No.351404519

B please dear god.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:21:17 No.351404538

im thinking B

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:21:26 No.351404558

b b b

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:21:39 No.351404588

b

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:21:39 No.351404590

A... duh

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:22:06 No.351404652

>>351404425

guy sounds like a fag. B

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:22:11 No.351404661

>>351399350

B

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:22:58 No.351404756

>>351404425

B

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:23:26 No.351404812

You know that your brother should be there soon. You give the boy a quick kiss on the cheek, then pull your hand away and turn to head back to the street. He grabs you by the arm before you can get anywhere and pulls you back.

"Hey!" you shout at him.

Then you feel his hand gripping your jaw. You try to protest, but he grabs you by the shoulder and pushes you down onto your knees in front of him. He wraps one hand around your throat, holding tightly. You try to shout, but you cannot say anything. You look to your right and see that the two other guys have come into the woods who were with him, and then you are surrounded.

They grab you by the arms, and one of them pulls your half-top up and over your head.

You feel your arms pulled tight, and then there is a cock pressed against your face, the head rubbing back and forth against your lips.

A. Bite.

B. Suck.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:24:27 No.351404969

A. Fuck those rapist bitches.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:24:38 No.351405003

A

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:24:58 No.351405056

>>351404812

A. Maybe your brother will hear and fuck 'em up with a tire iron

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:25:04 No.351405075

>>351404812

B

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:25:05 No.351405078

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>>351399350

fuck this cunt up.... A.... BITE UHM!

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:25:40 No.351405173

a it is, gotta get back to bro

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:25:44 No.351405183

>>351404812

A

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:25:57 No.351405211

>>351404812

A.

BITE THAT SHIT, BITCH

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:26:23 No.351405281

A

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:27:20 No.351405439

You open your mouth, letting the head of the cock inside of your mouth. And then you bite down with every ounce of force you can muster. You feel blood in your mouth, and a scream. The guy in front of you punches you in the face, sending you falling back onto the ground. You spit blood from your mouth, but before you can move you feel fists pounding against you. You try to cover your head as the guys begin to kick and punch you.

"You fucking slut! I'm going to fucking kill you!" screams one of the guys. You try to move to fight them, but a boot slams into your chest and you are left pulling yourself into a ball as they beat on you.

You look up briefly to see the boy you bit grabbing at his cock, blood pouring through his fingers.

Suddenly you hear a scream of rage, and one of the boys falls to the ground. You look up to see your brother holding a crowbar and standing over you.

"Run, sis!" he shouts.

A. Run.

B. Stand and fight with him.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:28:05 No.351405561

A

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:28:21 No.351405597

B. Fuck yeah.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:28:39 No.351405641

a

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:28:48 No.351405677

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>>351399350

B. They probly have a weapon but what the hell... KICK ASS!

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:28:56 No.351405692

>>351405056

you called that. props.

voting a

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:29:00 No.351405712

B

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:30:14 No.351405867

BBBBBB

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:30:21 No.351405887

>>351405692

Am I good or what? Too bad it was a crowbar though.. Woulda been epic if it was a tire iron

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:30:47 No.351405953

B fuck that shit

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:30:56 No.351405974

You scramble through the leaves to stand. Your brother is swinging the crowbar at one of the other guys, but you turn and begin to run back towards the street. You hear sounds of fighting and screaming from behind you as you sprint from the scene.

You arrive at your brother's truck, still topless, panting. Your skirt has ridden up and your ass is showing. You are bruised, and there is blood pouring from a cut on the side of your head.

You grab at the passenger side door, but the car is locked. You turn back towards the woods, and there stands the guy whose cock you bit. He has shoved his bleeding cock into his pants and looks dazed. But when he sees you he screams in rage and rushes towards you.

A. Fight him.

B. Run away.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:31:11 No.351406020

B

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:31:28 No.351406064

>>351405887

I hadn't seen your post when I wrote it... otherwise I might have written tire iron...

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:31:47 No.351406109

A

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:32:14 No.351406187

A

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:32:16 No.351406189

B.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:32:22 No.351406211

>>351399350

A. One fatal kick to the balls and hes dead.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:32:30 No.351406233

>>351405974

B

im choosing all the options that prevent sex. unless he da 1

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:32:39 No.351406254

B

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:32:40 No.351406257

A god damn it

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:32:51 No.351406278

>>351405974

b

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:33:00 No.351406308

BITE IT THE REST OF THE WAY OFF!

AAAAA

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:33:50 No.351406445

B

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:35:08 No.351406640

>>351405974

AA

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:35:11 No.351406655

You swing wildly at his face, but he dodges and then catches you in the stomach with his fist. You double over in pain, falling to your knees in front of him. You try to rise, but his knee hits you in the jaw, sending your head slamming back against the car door.

You feel his bloody hands wrap around your throat. You look up into the sunlight to see him kneeling on your chest trying to choke the life out of you. Suddenly his head smashes into the side of the door. Standing there, above you, is David.

He is screaming in rage, kicking and punching at the guy who was assaulting you. "Don't you ever fucking touch her!" he's shouting.

The guy manages to roll away from David, and then stands and begins to run down the street. David kneels at your side and brushes the hair from your face.

"Are you alright? Are you okay?"

A. "You... have to save my brother, David!"

B. "I'm okay... we just need to get out of here. Get me away from here."

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:35:39 No.351406717

A

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:36:07 No.351406791

Damn, go David. Anyways, A.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:36:17 No.351406819

a

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:36:24 No.351406839

B

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:36:27 No.351406846

>>351406655

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:36:40 No.351406877

A i wanted sex at first but now i want action

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:36:41 No.351406883

A

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:36:51 No.351406920

>>351406655

A

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:37:03 No.351406952

>>351406655

A. Shit.. Maybe we shoulda helped him earlier? And you can't leave a /b/ro behind

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:37:05 No.351406957

A but have your brother kill david afterwards hes beta as fuck and knows how it all happened.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:37:34 No.351407018

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>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:37:57 No.351407074

"You... have to save my brother, David," you whisper to him from between gasps.

"Anything for you," he responds. You gesture towards the woods, and then off David goes, running at full speed. You shelter yourself behind the car from the vehicles passing by on the street. You feel like you can barely breathe.

Within a minute or two, David and your brother emerge from the woods. The crowbar is covered in blood and bits of hair.

"Sis!" your brother shouts. He rushes over to you and kneels down beside you. "We have to get her to the hospital," he says to David.

A. "No, just take me home."

B. "No. Take me to David's house. I don't want anyone to see me like this."

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:38:23 No.351407143

>>351406655

a

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:38:47 No.351407206

A.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:38:54 No.351407218

AAAA

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:39:03 No.351407246

>>351407074

not really much of a choice but A i guess

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:39:03 No.351407247

B

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:39:03 No.351407249

>>351407074

BBBBB

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:39:08 No.351407259

>>351407074

A. Why the fuck would we go to a stranger's house?

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:39:15 No.351407274

B

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:39:20 No.351407287

B. David ended up being Semi Alpha

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:39:22 No.351407295

bbbb

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:39:23 No.351407298

>>351407074

b for /b/ro

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:39:50 No.351407358

A

wincest could happen.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:40:28 No.351407457

A

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:40:30 No.351407461

B DAMN IT!

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:40:44 No.351407504

>>351405078

>Here you go /b/ro.

Also A!

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:41:08 No.351407577

Your fortune: Average Luck

B

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:41:33 No.351407631

"No, just take me home," you say to your brother. David owns the back door to the car, and then your brother gingerly lifts you and places you in the back seat. He throws the crowbar down in front of you. David gets in the back seat with you. He pulls off his shirt and begins wiping the blood from your wounds as your brother starts the car.

Your brother speeds down the street back to the house as David gingerly tries to clean your wounds. You cough, some blood bubbling from your lips.

"I fucking bit him," you say to David with a smile.

"I saw... I saw," David says, trying to calm you.

Your brother opens the back door when you get back to the house and David picks you up, shirtless, to carry you inside.

Your brother leads David up the stairs and to the bathroom. Your brother turns on the water.

A. "David, can you wait outside while my brother cleans my wounds?"

B. "Bro, can you wait outside while David helps me with my cuts?"

C. Let them both stay.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:42:12 No.351407731

>>351407631

C. Let the three-some begin.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:42:21 No.351407755

C!

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:42:25 No.351407766

CCCCC

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:42:26 No.351407768

C

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:42:27 No.351407772

A. for incest

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:42:28 No.351407775

C. both stay so nothing happens. run if they try to do something.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:42:28 No.351407776

BBBB

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:42:34 No.351407793

>>351407631

A

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:42:41 No.351407814

Your fortune: Very Bad Luck

CCCCCCCCCCC

c for cocktease like a fucking champ

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:42:52 No.351407841

>>351407631

CCCCCC

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:42:56 No.351407850

>>351407631

B, get some nerd action

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:43:02 No.351407863

>>351407631

B. For the love of fucking teens fucking, B

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:43:03 No.351407865

B

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:43:04 No.351407867

CCCCCCCCC

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:43:16 No.351407897

c

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:43:25 No.351407925

/b/!!!!

B

B

B

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:44:02 No.351408015

b

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:44:12 No.351408040

C

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:44:39 No.351408098

Your fortune: Bad Luck

inb4 belair

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:44:45 No.351408113

Since B is a little irrational, ima go with C

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:45:16 No.351408193

You feel your brother's hands on your hips as he pulls your skirt off of you.

"First we have to get you cleaned up," he says, caring and concern in his eyes. You feel his hands on your ass, and then your black panties come down and off, falling to the floor.

David takes you by the hand, his clothes still on, and pulls you into the shower. The water is hot, and you shriek as it hits your wounds. You close your eyes as you feel someone's hands run over your body, rubbing the wounds with soap.

You feel fingers slide over your nipples and you moan softly. You feel someone rubbing their hands against your thighs where blood is trickling down your thigh and you reach down, holding their hand tightly.

You open your eyes, seeing David staring into your eyes, shirtless. Your brother is kneeling down beside the shower, rubbing you with soap.

A. Kiss David.

B. Reach down and grab David's cock.

C. Lean over and kiss your brother.

D. Tell them that they can both leave now.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:45:58 No.351408295

What the fuck is wrong with you people? WE NEED SOME GOOD OLD FASHIONED MURDER!

D. Let david clean you off then kill him.

He's still beta as fuck, hes in love with you even though you never talk to him and got him beat the fuck up. He even helped rescue you after you caused all this shit, so fuck that. Plus, hes a witness. MURDER!

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:46:02 No.351408309

>>351408193

A

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:46:08 No.351408330

B

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:46:12 No.351408339

>>351408193

D

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:46:16 No.351408352

>>351408193

>>351408193

CCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCC

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:46:33 No.351408394

A or D

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:46:45 No.351408426

C please

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:46:45 No.351408427

>>351408193

Obvious answer is D.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:46:49 No.351408436

c for wincest

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:46:56 No.351408455

BBB!!!

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:47:01 No.351408474

d

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:47:13 No.351408499

>>351408295

god fucking damn it.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:47:19 No.351408522

>>351408193

BBBBBB

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:47:24 No.351408533

>>351408295

D

is the correct answer

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:47:46 No.351408583

A is the Way

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:47:55 No.351408603

Fuck man got lotsa incestfags on this thread. ima go with A just cause i can.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:47:57 No.351408611

AAAAA

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:48:02 No.351408618

DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD cockblock both of them

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:48:07 No.351408638

You moan softly to yourself as you feel their hands all over you. You begin to get excited, and you know that this can't possibly happen. Not this way.

"Umm, I'm okay now. Can you both let me finish getting clean?" you say to them. They both seem to snap out of it. "Of course." "Yeah, no prob, sis."

They both stand and get out of the room, David soaking wet.

You sigh, gently rubbing yourself as the door closes behind them. You clean off the last of your wounds and then step out of the shower and turn off the water. There is nothing to wear but a robe, so you pull it on.

You step out into the hallway. You can hear David and your brother talking downstairs.

A. Go downstairs and ask them if they can take care of your cuts now.

B. Get dressed and then go see what they are talking about.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:48:16 No.351408675

B

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:48:20 No.351408686

>>351408193

D

D

D

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:48:26 No.351408704

F Make them suck each other off, then laugh at them for being so pathetic

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:48:44 No.351408753

>>351408638

BBBBB

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:49:01 No.351408801

>>351408638

A!!!

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:49:02 No.351408806

A

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:49:05 No.351408812

>>351408638

B

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:49:15 No.351408845

>>351408638

get dressed and sneak out of the house

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:49:26 No.351408868

AAAAA

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:49:26 No.351408869

>>351408638

a

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:49:27 No.351408873

>>351408638

A

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:49:39 No.351408904

Pick up something heavy and hit david with it while he is talking with your brother.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:49:45 No.351408924

A FOR THE LOVE OF GOD.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:49:46 No.351408928

>>351408638

B

Man B.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:49:58 No.351408958

A

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:49:59 No.351408965

I hate OP with all of my heart.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:50:06 No.351408981

BBBBBBBBBB

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:51:00 No.351409124

You head back to your room and get dressed. In a hurry, you just pull on a pair of jeans and a t-shirt. You have had enough of looking like a slut for the day, as it's only gotten you into trouble.

You head downstairs as you hear David and your brother talking.

"We have to go back and take care of the bodies," your brother is arguing.

"No, we need to find the other guy and get rid of him first. Then we can deal with everything all at once," David responds.

You step into the room and they go silent. David is standing there, shirtless. His body is not actually all that bad, and the cut on his lip makes him look like a bit of a badass.

"You... you fucking killed them?" you ask.

Your brother nods slowly.

A. "We need to find the last one and kill him then."

B. "We need to go take care of the bodies."

C. "Get out of here and leave me out of this!"

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:51:10 No.351409157

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Spoiler alert!

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:51:45 No.351409238

AAAA

>>             OddPerspective !ROtYyzcY5Q 09/03/11(Sat)01:51:51 No.351409259

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Hey OP, why doesn't David have any swag?

Also, A.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:51:51 No.351409260

>>351409157

D

Threesome.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:52:11 No.351409316

B

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:52:17 No.351409328

You absolute bastards made us miss the threesome.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:52:35 No.351409384

A obviously .... dont need a snitch

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:52:36 No.351409388

>>351409124

a

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:52:36 No.351409390

A: YOU need to find the last one and take care of him. I cant be late to class.

>>             Deranker !hQiBUENOxU 09/03/11(Sat)01:52:41 No.351409406

>>351409259

love you

start a david thread in a bit?

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:52:47 No.351409425

AAAAAAA!!!!

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:52:48 No.351409429

>>351409124

Z, FUCKING STAB EVERYBODY

>>             OddPerspective !ROtYyzcY5Q 09/03/11(Sat)01:52:53 No.351409438

>>351409124

B

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:53:07 No.351409474

>>351409259

so fucking hot...

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:53:26 No.351409529

they didn't do anything illegal! C is the only option :(

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:54:03 No.351409621

"We need to find the last one and kill him then," you say to them coldly.

They look at each other in surprise. "Alright... well, how do you propose we do that?"

"Well, we know he won't have gone to the hospital with a cock bite... so he will have gone home. And we can just look in the yearbook, given he's on the football team, find his name, then look him up."

David nods. "Yeah, he'll show up in last year's yearbook as on the team."

Within a few minutes you have found his name, and then his home address. Your brother looks at you. "So who goes?"

A. "We all go, brother."

B. "Just David. You stay here with me. We can't all be at risk at the same time."

C. "Just you, bro. You killed the first two. It's safer this way."

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:57:12 No.351410093

C!

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:57:17 No.351410108

c

get david laid

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:57:44 No.351410180

>>351409868

No, I write these as I go along.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:58:03 No.351410234

A

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:58:03 No.351410235

Aa

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:58:11 No.351410253

C. David can go fuck him self.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:58:11 No.351410254

AAAAAAAA

david needs it!

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:58:16 No.351410265

>>351410093

>>351410108

These two were votes from the last one. I'll discard them, as it was obvious.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:58:25 No.351410285

>>351410090

AA david needs pussy

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:58:26 No.351410288

>>351410090

FUCKING

A

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:58:28 No.351410293

a

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:58:32 No.351410302

>>351410108

this was ment to be A

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:58:32 No.351410303

>>351410090

C cause /b/ is a raging cunt

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:58:52 No.351410363

A

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:59:02 No.351410384

CCCCCCCCCCCCCCC

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:59:05 No.351410390

A.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:59:09 No.351410404

A!

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:59:15 No.351410421

>>351399350

A

>>           wow Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:59:28 No.351410462

>>351410093

>>351410108

REALLY!?!? You just made him NOT get laid.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:59:30 No.351410467

B! women to kitchen

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:59:39 No.351410482

If you don't vote A then you're a candy-ass....end of discussion

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)01:59:40 No.351410484

wish i found this sooner, i wanna catch up D:

"What the fuck do you want, David?"

>>             OddPerspective !ROtYyzcY5Q 09/03/11(Sat)02:00:14 No.351410580

>>351410011

Wait, David's Adventure, or this?

>>351409965

Yep. Not much longer until I can finally send it out.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:00:21 No.351410606

F5F5F5F5F5F5F5F5F5

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:00:36 No.351410634

i hate you fucking fags.

Be a little MORE predictable betafags

also C

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:00:41 No.351410658

You lean forward and wrap your arms around David. "David, I want to thank you for what you have done for me," you whisper in his ear.

You can almost hear his swallow. You giggle to yourself. You kiss his ear softly. You then trail your kiss back down to his lips, pecking gently against them.

"Don't you want to kiss me, David?" you ask him with a smile. He responds by wrapping his arms around you and pulling you into him, his mouth covering yours. He kisses you deeply, his tongue sliding into your mouth. You kiss him back, your tongues playing together. You feel him push you back onto the kitchen table.

He stands between your spread legs, and you can feel his hard cock pressed against the inside of your thigh through your jeans. You reach down and grab at it, making him gasp in pleasure.

A. "Fuck me, David. Now!'

B. Get down on your knees and suck his cock.

>>             Silent !ZtIxy9nLcA 09/03/11(Sat)02:00:46 No.351410673

>>351410090

Hey bro do you have maybe an email I can send your story to? I have copy pasted everything into wordpad because I really like where this went. I would love to email this to you it has a lot of potential.

>>             Silent !ZtIxy9nLcA 09/03/11(Sat)02:00:46 No.351410673

>>351410090

Hey bro do you have maybe an email I can send your story to? I have copy pasted everything into wordpad because I really like where this went. I would love to email this to you it has a lot of potential.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:01:17 No.351410773

f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5

f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5

f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5f5

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:01:27 No.351410807

>>351410658

B

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:01:30 No.351410813

B YOU FOOLS

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:01:39 No.351410832

B

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:01:44 No.351410847

>>351410658

b

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:01:50 No.351410866

b

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:01:52 No.351410874

C. Fuck off David!

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:01:57 No.351410887

>>351410673

I will post it once done.

http://storiesofop.blogspot.com

>>             Deranker !hQiBUENOxU 09/03/11(Sat)02:01:58 No.351410889

>>351410658

Q

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:02:05 No.351410911

B

>>             OddPerspective !ROtYyzcY5Q 09/03/11(Sat)02:02:13 No.351410927

>>351410658

There needs to be a "punch David in the face" option.

But sure, A.

Also OP, get a trip.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:02:15 No.351410931

A

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:02:17 No.351410936

hmmmm....

...i choose B

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:02:20 No.351410947

>>351410658

AAAA

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:02:29 No.351410970

b

>>             Yanz 09/03/11(Sat)02:02:33 No.351410984

B!

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:02:35 No.351410991

>>351410658

b

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:02:43 No.351411009

>>351410658

A.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:02:51 No.351411033

B....Gotta make a bitch work for the dick

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:02:57 No.351411047

>>351410658

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

>>             Silent !ZtIxy9nLcA 09/03/11(Sat)02:03:14 No.351411089

>>351410887

Alright.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:03:15 No.351411090

B!

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:03:21 No.351411103

Fucking damn it. Always with the sex.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:03:21 No.351411104

A!

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:03:33 No.351411132

>>351410866

hope she doesnt bite this one too

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:03:44 No.351411158

>>351411033

agreed

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:03:54 No.351411191

B for BITE THAT DICK OFF TOO

WE CRAZY HERE

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:03:55 No.351411196

A niggas

>>             OddPerspective !ROtYyzcY5Q 09/03/11(Sat)02:04:05 No.351411213

>>351410180

I missed this earlier.

If you really don't script, you're a fucking fast typer OP. Props.

You got an email?

>>             Deranker !hQiBUENOxU 09/03/11(Sat)02:04:09 No.351411222

AYO OP I GOT A SPARE TRIP NIGGA

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:04:14 No.351411235

You push David back and then slide down to your knees in front of him. You unbuckle his pants, look up at him, smile, and then pull his pants and boxers down.

His cock stands up hard and proud in front of him, precum glistening on the top. You lower your mouth and gently kiss the head of his cock. You feel him gasp as your lips touch the head.

You then slide as much as you can into your mouth in one movement, his cock pushing deep. He gasps and grips the counter, falling back against it. You begin to bob your head up and down on his cock, loving the feeling of it sliding into your mouth.

You swirl your tongue around his length as you do, and he moans loudly.

A. Keep sucking until he empties his load in your mouth.

B. Now that he's hard, he might as well bend you over and fuck you.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:04:39 No.351411296

>>351410658

Aaaaaaaaa

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:04:43 No.351411313

C. BITE IT OFF

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:04:44 No.351411316

>>351411213

Don't script.

thatrandomguyoverinthere@gmail.com

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:04:51 No.351411332

B AGAIN

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:04:58 No.351411352

>>351411235

AaAaAaA

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:04:59 No.351411354

a

taste it :P

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:05:16 No.351411404

B FOR THE LOVE OF CHRIST

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:05:17 No.351411408

c.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:05:18 No.351411415

>>351411158

Finally a /b/rother who understands how to be an alpha male :)

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:05:23 No.351411427

C FOR THE BITE!!!!!!!!!!

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:05:25 No.351411430

B

B

B

B

B

B

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:05:26 No.351411432

>>351411235

A NOW

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:05:34 No.351411447

>>351399350

B

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:05:34 No.351411448

>>351411235

BBBBBBBB

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:05:36 No.351411453

a, he'll never last

>>             OddPerspective !ROtYyzcY5Q 09/03/11(Sat)02:05:37 No.351411459

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>>351411235

A.

OP, you're starting to disappoint me with your lack of versatility.

Pic related.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:05:54 No.351411503

A

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:06:04 No.351411528

B

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:06:07 No.351411538

>>351411235

B

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:06:13 No.351411556

B nao

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:06:19 No.351411593

OP GIVE BITE OPTION DONT BE A FAG

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:06:31 No.351411622

C FOR A BIG BITE

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:06:37 No.351411635

>>351399350

BBBBBB

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:06:49 No.351411672

a

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:06:52 No.351411685

B

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:06:57 No.351411703

B you retards!

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:07:02 No.351411716

b

>>             Silent !ZtIxy9nLcA 09/03/11(Sat)02:07:19 No.351411746

>>351411316

this your email OP?

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:07:23 No.351411759

BITE THE COCK OFF

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:07:24 No.351411763

No sense in ending the party before it starts. I pick B

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:07:25 No.351411764

sit on his lap and start choking him out.

>>             OddPerspective !ROtYyzcY5Q 09/03/11(Sat)02:07:26 No.351411765

>>351411316

Awesome.

We should totally collab then.

I've got some ideas planned with some other CYOAfags around here. You'd certainly be a welcome addition.

Hit me up @ oddperspective@yahoo.com.

Also, get a fucking trip already dude. You're going to get threadjacked one of these days.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:07:29 No.351411776

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>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:07:30 No.351411782

Needs moar violence OP.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:07:39 No.351411803

You continue to bob your head up and down on his cock, increasing the pace as he begins to thrust forward. You grip the base of his cock as you suck, keeping him from pushing too far into your mouth.

You look up and can see in his eyes that he is going to explode soon. You grab his balls with your free hand and begin to rub them. You pull your mouth briefly off his cock. "You want to cum in my mouth, David?" He just moans in response.

You descend back onto his cock, sucking it deep into your mouth. You feel him twitch, and then again, and then his load is filling your mouth. Some escapes from between your lips, but you swallow as much as you can.

You pull off his cock once his spent, some cum dribbling down your chin. "Nice?"

He just groans.

A. Tell him to go get cleaned up.

B. Tell him it's fine for him to go home.

C. Give your brother a call to see what is going on.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:08:00 No.351411847

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>>351411803

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:08:00 No.351411847

     File1315030080.gif-(188 KB, 120x120, Son_I_am_party.gif)      

>>351411803

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:08:28 No.351411900

BBbbbbbbbBBbbBb

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:08:28 No.351411902

c

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:08:28 No.351411903

>>351411803

C

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:08:30 No.351411909

A THEN C

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:08:35 No.351411923

b. get the fuck out of here trash.

>>             OddPerspective !ROtYyzcY5Q 09/03/11(Sat)02:08:36 No.351411925

>>351411803

B.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:08:40 No.351411935

>>351411803

Fuck you OP... wanted more. A

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:08:48 No.351411961

C

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:08:49 No.351411962

C

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:08:53 No.351411974

>>351411803

C k

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:08:58 No.351411983

>>351411803

D: I wanted B dammit...

Now I want A

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:08:59 No.351411985

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A

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:09:02 No.351411990

B. Where was the bite? D:

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:09:03 No.351411993

C!

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:10:02 No.351412146

not enough abuse of betafags

/b/ for beta

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:10:05 No.351412154

You stand up, leaving David standing there, dazed, and grab your phone from the table. You look and realize that you have missed a call. It was on vibrate. Your brother had called. A few minutes ago. You begin to dial your brother back when he walks back into the room. He is covered in blood.

He sees the two of you, David with his cock out, and you with cum dripping down your chin, and his eyes widen.

"What the fuck is going on here?" he shouts.

A. "I was just thanking David for his assistance..."

B. "Who cares? What happened?"

C. "What? Pissed off you weren't invited to the party, bro?"

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:10:10 No.351412169

no bite... B

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:10:13 No.351412178

C, to the fucking trips

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:10:46 No.351412244

>>351412154

D

"I just sucked David's cock, want me to suck yours?"

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:10:51 No.351412253

a

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:10:54 No.351412263

>>351412154

B

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:10:58 No.351412274

C is god

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:11:06 No.351412295

>>351412154

HE FORCED ME BROTHER!!!!

then bawwww

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:11:07 No.351412296

>>351412154

B GO

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:11:18 No.351412328

eh C. I was looking forward to the bite

>>             OddPerspective !ROtYyzcY5Q 09/03/11(Sat)02:11:42 No.351412370

>>351412154

D. Attack

But fine, C.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:12:02 No.351412413

C. tell david he needs to get to work on big brother now.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:12:11 No.351412435

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A or C!!

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:12:50 No.351412529

omg the troll in me is voting for C. do it candy-ass DO IT

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:13:10 No.351412575

Jesus. NOW can we kill david? FFS

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:13:22 No.351412598

>>351412263

>>351412169

"Who cares? What happened?" you ask him.

"I just fucking killed someone for you, and you went around and just sucked some fucking guy's cock?" he responds. David is busy trying to shove his cock back into his pants when your brother's fist catches him in the face. David falls to the ground. Your brother begins to kick David in the stomach.

"You took advantage of my sister when she was fucked you, you piece of shit!" he shouts.

He is kicking David again and again, and David cannot even get off the floor to fight back.

"You stupid beta little fuck!" David shouts.

A. Just leave. Just leave the house and leave them there.

B. Try to stop your brother.

C. Just sit and watch until it's over.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:13:26 No.351412604

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>>351412154

D

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:13:38 No.351412640

>>351412575

>>351412575

>>351412575

>>351412575

>>351412575

>>351412575

that

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:13:46 No.351412658

All this sex is stupid, go watch some porn you horny bastards.

>>             OddPerspective !ROtYyzcY5Q 09/03/11(Sat)02:14:21 No.351412751

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>>351412529

>>implying C is a troll answer

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:14:24 No.351412763

A

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:14:27 No.351412767

AAAAAAAAAAAAAA

lets go steal a car

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:14:28 No.351412769

B

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:14:31 No.351412779

>>351412598

C fuck yeah.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:14:40 No.351412798

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>>351412598

B

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:14:52 No.351412825

>>351412598

C

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:14:53 No.351412829

B

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:15:05 No.351412862

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C

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:15:06 No.351412867

>>351412598

B!! that slut started it make her end it!

>>             Deranker !hQiBUENOxU 09/03/11(Sat)02:15:08 No.351412870

>>351412598

check your email in a sec, op

no BS its a trip you can use lol

>>             OddPerspective !ROtYyzcY5Q 09/03/11(Sat)02:15:19 No.351412902

>>351412598

C.

I like this OP.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:15:21 No.351412905

C. Your a crazy bitch

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:15:35 No.351412947

You really are just a bunch of candy-asss arent you?

A

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:15:58 No.351412993

You grab your phone from the table, watching your brother beating on David, and then just walk out the door. It slams behind you.

You see that your brother has left his car parked in the driveway with the keys inside. He must have thought something was wrong when you didn't pick up his call.

You get in the driver's seat. The crowbar is sitting in the passenger seat, covered in blood.

A. Go to the cops and tell them that your brother is a crazed killer.

B. Go to the mall.

C. Just sit in the car and wait.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:16:17 No.351413048

B

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:16:34 No.351413076

>>351412993

B

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:16:36 No.351413082

B.

NEED SHOES

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:16:38 No.351413091

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>>351412993

Like, Totally B.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:16:41 No.351413099

>>351412993

B, why the fuck not?

>>             OddPerspective !ROtYyzcY5Q 09/03/11(Sat)02:16:48 No.351413119

>>351412993

C

I lol'd.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:17:03 No.351413160

Finally.

C.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:17:18 No.351413201

>>351412993

A. makes it really interesting, crazy bitch

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:17:30 No.351413229

B fer sur

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:17:32 No.351413238

>>351412993

A for epic fucking trolling

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:17:35 No.351413246

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>>351412993

A.

Then pull a david and start shooting up the place and fuck the woman cop.

Also, heres an OC image.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:18:13 No.351413328

You begin to drive to the mall. You have no idea what you're doing, but you just drive. You shake your head, wondering why at least three people are now dead, possibly a fourth.

You are heading towards the mall when a cop car pulls up behind you. He flashes his lights. You realize that you are driving your brother's car and you have no idea what happened at the other guy's house.

Your fingers tighten on the wheel.

A. Pull over for the cops.

B. Fuck it. Blow through the next intersection and try to escape.

> B was chosen

> About to write B

>>             OddPerspective !ROtYyzcY5Q 09/03/11(Sat)02:22:33 No.351413935

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Found you OP.

Write that shit.

Bump with tits.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:22:56 No.351413976

>>351413686

The cop turns on his sirens as you hit the gas. There is an intersection up ahead, and there are cars piling up behind the red light in front of you.

You swerve into the oncoming traffic lane, the cop following you. You hit the gas as you head towards the intersection, praying.

Just before you hit the intersection, you grip the wheel tightly, your heat leaping into your throat. You make it through. You look in the rearview mirror and see a car plow into the cop car, sending it spinning and into a wall.

Holy fuck.

The phone is ringing. It's your brother.

"Why the fuck am I being chased by the cops?" you say as you pick up.

"Someone must have seen me. Quick, come back to pick me up!"

A. Go back to pick up your brother.

B. Fuck it! Go turn yourself in.

C. Fuck it! Ditch the car.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:23:14 No.351414016

I'll just leave this here http://JustJB.com/G1E0G

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:23:20 No.351414033

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>>351413686

Get in here!

tcap.dyndns.tv - To Catch A Predator

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:23:22 No.351414038

nice

>>             OddPerspective !ROtYyzcY5Q 09/03/11(Sat)02:23:49 No.351414100

>>351413976

C. Fuck that butthurt motherfucker.

>>             Silent !ZtIxy9nLcA 09/03/11(Sat)02:23:50 No.351414102

>>351413935

Your fucking gorgeous.. Back to the story though lol.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:24:42 No.351414221

>>351413976

C

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:24:49 No.351414244

aaa

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:24:50 No.351414245

>>351413976

A

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:24:51 No.351414247

A

maybe theres another dead body and wincest

>>             OddPerspective !ROtYyzcY5Q 09/03/11(Sat)02:24:58 No.351414260

>>351414102

Haha that's not me bro. That's Crayonchan, supplying the only tits I have saved on this computer.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:25:05 No.351414274

1a

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:25:13 No.351414293

B

>>             Silent !ZtIxy9nLcA 09/03/11(Sat)02:25:49 No.351414385

>>351414260

Davids adventure I guess is what through me off O.o How is that the only set of tits!!

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:26:04 No.351414416

D CONTINUE TO MALL NEED SHOES

>>             OddPerspective !ROtYyzcY5Q 09/03/11(Sat)02:26:13 No.351414444

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Tit bump.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:26:34 No.351414498

"No, brother, I'm not going to come pick you up. You're on your own!" you shout back. You pull the car over to the side of the road. You look at the crowbar sitting there, shudder, then get out of the vehicle.

You begin to walk down the street away from the car. Your phone rings again. It's David. You can tell from the caller ID. But how the fuck did he get your number?

You answer. "Are you alright?" you ask him.

"Yeah, I managed to get away from your brother. I'm on my way home right now. You need somewhere to stay?"

A. Run to David's house.

B. Forget David. He's a pussy. Call your friend Tina.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:26:55 No.351414554

c

>>             Silent !ZtIxy9nLcA 09/03/11(Sat)02:26:57 No.351414559

>>351414444

Nice quads.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:27:17 No.351414610

A

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:27:30 No.351414645

B

TINA IS SHOE BUDDY

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:27:57 No.351414710

>>351414498

B

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:28:04 No.351414727

BBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBB

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:28:05 No.351414730

aa

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:28:07 No.351414734

B

>>             Deranker !hQiBUENOxU 09/03/11(Sat)02:28:30 No.351414777

>>351413686

took me years to find this thread again

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:28:44 No.351414825

A

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:29:02 No.351414871

Summary thus far:

> You got dressed slutty in the morning

> You got on the bus to go to school

> David grabbed you

> You got tossed off the bus when some guys started beating him up

> One of them tried to rape you in the woods

> You bit his cock

> Your brother came and beat them with a crowbar

> David helped you

> They took you home

> You almost fucked them in the shower

> Your brother went back out to kill the last one

> You sucked David's cock

> Your brother flipped out when he got home

> You stole bro's car and tried to drive away

> Chased by cops

> Now is now

>>             OddPerspective !ROtYyzcY5Q 09/03/11(Sat)02:29:15 No.351414907

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>>351414385

I don't really save porn on my computer.

"David's Adventure" is my main CYOA game. I'm a CYOAfag like OP. Crayonchan came into one of my threads and supplied spontaneous tits. I have a shitton more. I sometimes use these as title pics too. They have nothing to do with OP's game. Although, OP's game and DA do coincidentally share a lot of similarities...

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:29:20 No.351414919

B

do it for the shoes!

>>             Silent !ZtIxy9nLcA 09/03/11(Sat)02:29:28 No.351414932

>>351414777

Lol, Yeah I freaked out a bit but then I saw it and was like OH THANK THE LORD!

>>             Silent !ZtIxy9nLcA 09/03/11(Sat)02:30:43 No.351415122

>>351414907

Meh, I like the story thus far lol.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:30:46 No.351415129

"You're on your own with this one, David," you say to him. "You helped a killer. I just almost got raped. Enjoy." You hang up the phone.

You call your friend Tina. "What do you want, babe? I'm in class?"

"Come pick me up and take me to your place. Had a totally fucked up day."

"Babe, I'm in class."

"Just fucking come pick me up," you begin to sob over the phone.

"Okay, okay. Where are you? Okay, I'm on my way."

You sit at the side of the road, tears in your eyes, as you wait for Tina to arrive. Finally she pulls up in her beater car. You get inside.

"What the hell is going on?" she asks you.

A. Tell her everything.

B. "Just take me to your house. Please. Please!"

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:31:27 No.351415238

>>351415129

A

>>             Deranker !hQiBUENOxU 09/03/11(Sat)02:31:28 No.351415240

>>351415129

i emailed op a free trip i had laying around, yet he refuses to use it?!?!

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:31:33 No.351415254

B.

Tiem to rape Tina, and take her shoes.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:31:41 No.351415276

>>351415129

B

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:31:44 No.351415284

>>351415129

B

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:32:05 No.351415323

Bbbbbbbb lezbo action!!!!

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:32:24 No.351415366

Man fuck these guys should have stuck with him.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:32:28 No.351415373

b

b

b

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:33:23 No.351415516

"Just take me to your house. Please. Please!" Tina agrees, and she drives you to her house in silence.

The two of you get out of the car and she leads you up to her room. Tina has an amazing collection of shoes. You sit down and begin going through her closet, trying to forget about what happened as you look through her collection.

You turn to Tina, holding up a pair of red shoes. "These are beautiful!"

Tina looks at you and puts her hand on your shoulder. "You need to tell me what happened. Please. I'm your friend."

A. Tell her what happened.

B. "No! If you can't accept it... then I'll just leave!"

C. Try to kiss her instead.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:33:31 No.351415529

B

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:33:31 No.351415530

b

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:33:58 No.351415605

>>351415530

>>351415529

Too fast. Must have been for previous...

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:33:58 No.351415606

>>351415516

C

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:34:07 No.351415624

c

c

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:34:08 No.351415626

lol jk C

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:34:09 No.351415627

>>351415516

A

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:34:15 No.351415640

C

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:34:27 No.351415665

C

>>             OddPerspective !ROtYyzcY5Q 09/03/11(Sat)02:34:28 No.351415667

>>351415122

Oh, it's certainly good, and I definitely respect OP's quick writing skill. In fact, I just emailed OP inviting him to join me and some other CYOAfags for collaborations. He better fucking respond though.

Also,

>>351415129

B

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:34:34 No.351415684

C

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:34:38 No.351415696

Cccccccccccccc!!!!!!!1

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:34:46 No.351415718

CCCC

>>             Silent !ZtIxy9nLcA 09/03/11(Sat)02:35:12 No.351415788

.>>351415516

And now I am kinda not liking where this is going :/

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:35:36 No.351415846

>>351415788

oh you will

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:35:40 No.351415857

you guys should reply to the one you are voting for so OP doesn't get confused.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:35:59 No.351415912

You lean forward and pull her into a hug. She responds by pulling you close and wrapping her arms around you. You pull back slightly and brush your lips against hers. She pulls back.

"What are you doing?" she asks.

You giggle and then try to kiss her again. She pushes you away. "What is wrong with you today?" she asks you.

"What's wrong with you? Why do you have to keep asking me that?" you shout in response.

"I'm your friend! I want to know what's going on!"

A. "Well fuck you! I'm going to leave then!"

B. "If you're my friend then you should accept me and comfort me!" Try to kiss her again.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:36:07 No.351415930

If tina rejects love, kill tina with shoes.

>>             OddPerspective !ROtYyzcY5Q 09/03/11(Sat)02:36:08 No.351415932

>>351415240

I'm sure OP knows how to make a trip. I'm just getting more and more tempted to threadjack. OP MAKE A GODDAMN TRIP.

Also OP, count more than just the first vote.

>>             Silent !ZtIxy9nLcA 09/03/11(Sat)02:36:17 No.351415950

>>351415667

Yeah his writing skills are great but its drifting a little bit now.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:36:22 No.351415962

>>351415857

this

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:36:39 No.351415998

>>351415912

B

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:36:40 No.351416001

>>351415912

b

>>             OddPerspective !ROtYyzcY5Q 09/03/11(Sat)02:36:41 No.351416005

>>351415912

A

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:36:51 No.351416032

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BBB!!!

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:36:58 No.351416050

Bbbbbbbbbb

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:37:13 No.351416089

>>351415912

b

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:37:29 No.351416127

B

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:37:33 No.351416138

B nao!!!!!!!

>>             Silent !ZtIxy9nLcA 09/03/11(Sat)02:37:46 No.351416169

.>>351415932

Dont thread jack :/

>>351415930

DONT FUCKING KILL TINA WITH SHOES WTF IS WRONG WITH YOU!

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:38:00 No.351416216

>>351415950

It's not really his fault, it's the choices being made. People only want sex and shoes

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:38:05 No.351416228

b

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:38:20 No.351416268

"If you're my friend then you should accept me and comfort me!" You lean forward and try to kiss her again. She slaps you in the face.

"What the fuck is wrong with you? Get out of my fucking house!" she shouts. You look at her. You can feel the rage building in you. She's not a good friend. She's just someone who's pretending. She just wanted to act like a friend... she never really cared about you.

What the hell is wrong with her? Why did she even bother to pick you up?

A. Walk out the door.

B. Hit her in the face.

>>             OddPerspective !ROtYyzcY5Q 09/03/11(Sat)02:38:40 No.351416309

>>351415950

See, that's the problem with the improv that 99% of CYOAfags do. That's why I want to start collaborating and trading out and developing a more unified, organized approach to CYOA. It's a fucking art.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:38:45 No.351416319

>>351416268

B!

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:38:51 No.351416332

>>351416268

b

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:38:55 No.351416346

>>351416268

B, that bitch

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:38:55 No.351416348

>>351415932

It is always best first two out of three. And I don't use a trip because I seldom need to.

>>             Silent !ZtIxy9nLcA 09/03/11(Sat)02:39:03 No.351416358

>>351416216

Exactly.. I like where it was before. It was before suspenseful and climactic and I was enjoying every second of it.. Now he is just giving in to these newfags demands.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:39:06 No.351416366

>>351416268

B :D

>>             OddPerspective !ROtYyzcY5Q 09/03/11(Sat)02:39:12 No.351416379

>>351416268

I like this OP.

Also, B.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:39:13 No.351416380

>>351416268

a

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:39:23 No.351416404

>>351416268

bbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:39:39 No.351416441

>>351416268

A, failed makeout, deserved slap, gtfo the house

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:39:48 No.351416469

Fucking fuck b

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:40:05 No.351416500

B - Knock the fuck out of her and bury her alive.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:40:12 No.351416517

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b

>>             OddPerspective !ROtYyzcY5Q 09/03/11(Sat)02:40:18 No.351416538

>>351416216

He only has like two choices, and unfortunately, they're pretty narrow. That's not really the problem.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:40:36 No.351416579

Go for b, make something happen instead of slight lesbo action, advance the plot

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:40:44 No.351416593

You hit her in the face as hard as you can. Tina goes reeling backwards. "You stupid bitch!" you shout at her. The feeling that has built up throughout the day flows through you and you launch yourself at her.

Her foot catches you in the chest, and you are sent reeling back. Tina, who has not been beaten already this day, stands and pushes you out the door to her room and slams the door behind her. "Get the fuck out of my house!" she shouts at you. "I'm calling the cops on you! Get out of my house you stupid bitch!"

Fuck.

A. Leave the house and run for it.

B. Find something to break down the door. You can't let her call the cops on you.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:41:11 No.351416647

>>351416593

b

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:41:23 No.351416681

B

Bitch is hoarding all dem shoes. Fuck that cunt

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:41:28 No.351416693

>>351416593

B, fight to the death.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:41:43 No.351416718

>>351416593

B

>>             OddPerspective !ROtYyzcY5Q 09/03/11(Sat)02:41:51 No.351416737

>>351416593

A

Wow, why's Tina such a cunt?

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:42:03 No.351416763

>>351416593

>>351416593

bbbbbbb

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:42:05 No.351416767

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A

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:42:10 No.351416775

I choose you B!

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:42:39 No.351416830

>A

however if b just do something that seems slightly normal

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:42:48 No.351416853

Well....this story WAS awesome.....

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:43:47 No.351416992

DON'T WORRY the story is getting back on track it looks like

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:43:59 No.351417018

>>351416853

are you KIDDING ME?

betafags winning? Not awesome

vindictive shoe hoarding bitchfights? fucking win.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:44:00 No.351417021

B

>>             OddPerspective !ROtYyzcY5Q 09/03/11(Sat)02:44:04 No.351417032

>>351416853

Give him some constructive criticism or eat a dick.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:44:22 No.351417085

You can hear her on the phone as you look around the house for something to break down the door. You see a guitar amplifier in the living room and you grab it. You walk back to the door. You can hear her on the phone inside, and you begin to smash at the door.

"Get off the fucking phone, Tina!" you shout.

She screams back at you. "The cops are on their way, you bitch." You smash forward with all your might, and the door collapses inward.

"Get the fuck off the phone!" you shout at her as you jump at her. She tries to kick you again, but this time you dodge. You knock her to the ground and begin to hit her in the face. You grab her by the hair and smash her head against the ground. You smash her again and again, looking into her eyes as blood begins to pour from the back of her skull.

"You stupid fucking bitch! You bitch! Why did you do this to me?"

You hear sirens in the distance.

A. Run for it.

B. Keep beating Tina until she doesn't move anymore.

C. Pick up her cell and say that nothing is wrong.

>>             Silent !ZtIxy9nLcA 09/03/11(Sat)02:44:23 No.351417088

>>351416593

C: FUCKING CONFESS EVERYTHING TO HER!

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:44:59 No.351417159

>>351417085

b

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:45:18 No.351417204

>>351417085

bbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:45:25 No.351417216

Grab shoes and run

tell cops it was all david.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:45:36 No.351417236

>>351417085 B, duh

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:45:43 No.351417258

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>>351417088

>>351417088

That's the way candy-asss do it.

Anyways, OP. I choose C.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:45:44 No.351417261

>>351417085

C

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:45:48 No.351417269

A

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:45:53 No.351417280

B

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:46:06 No.351417311

>>351417021

He fucking took characters out of the story! How is that not shitty?

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:46:26 No.351417348

A (with shoes)

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:46:58 No.351417418

You decide to just keep beating on Tina.

Sure enough, after a few good punches, that bitch is down.

Good riddance.

You can see the police lights and hear the police outside.

What do you do?

A. Make a run for it (<6)

B. Take them on (<4)

C. Drag Tina upstairs and hide (<3)

D. Cry

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:47:15 No.351417456

>>351417032

Anytime ;) <3

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:47:37 No.351417500

You smash Tina's head into the ground again and again. You hold onto her hair tightly as you beat her against the floor. You can feel the rage flowing through you. Fuck those rapists. And fuck your brother for hitting David. And fuck David for being suck a pussy.

She's not moving anymore. You look down and see that her eyes are lifeless. Your hands are covered in blood. Tears are pouring down your face.

"Stop!" you hear. You look over your shoulder and two police officers have their pistols trained on you.

Tears are pouring down your face. You stand up and face them. "It wasn't my fault... it wasn't my fault!"

A. "She attacked me! I phoned you! That's my phone!"

B. "It's not my fault! I was raped!"

C. Pretend to surrender and then attack them.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:47:42 No.351417508

>>351417418

C.

What do the "<#"s mean?

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:47:47 No.351417525

>>351417418

threadjack detected.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:47:56 No.351417549

A take her best shoes first though.

>>             Deranker !hQiBUENOxU 09/03/11(Sat)02:47:57 No.351417553

>>351417418

lol, Odd

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:48:23 No.351417613

>>351417500

c

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:48:32 No.351417629

A

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:48:39 No.351417655

>>351417418

let's go with a C

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:48:44 No.351417667

>>351417500

A

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:48:48 No.351417677

>>351417500

A pl0x

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:48:51 No.351417682

>>351417500

A real op

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:48:52 No.351417683

>>351417418

Thanks for taking over. OP was a fag.

A

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:48:53 No.351417684

>>351417500

c

>>             OddPerspective !ROtYyzcY5Q 09/03/11(Sat)02:49:00 No.351417698

>>351417553

Guilty as charged haha.

I had to do it.

OP, GET A MOTHERFUCKING TRIP ALREADY BEFORE SOMEONE DOES IT FOR REAL.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:49:01 No.351417700

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>>351417418

>>351417418

Go make your own thread?

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:49:58 No.351417825

"She attacked me! I phoned you! That's my phone!" you begin to tell them. One of them steps forward.

"Get down on your knees... now!"

You kneel down in front of him. You look up at him as he goes to put the cuffs on you. "I'm telling you. It wasn't me. It wasn't my fault. It wasn't my fault!"

He steps behind you, his hand still on his pistol.

A. It's over. Let them take you.

B. Grab his gun hand and try to shoot his partner with it.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:50:01 No.351417834

>>351417500

Let's go with A

also, OP should get a trip

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:50:33 No.351417891

>>351417825

B, KILL EM

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:50:34 No.351417897

>>351417698

>>351417698

Go choke on a dick.

Anyways, I choose C.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:50:40 No.351417912

B. fuck it, this cant be end game, not with all these shoes here.

>>             OddPerspective !ROtYyzcY5Q 09/03/11(Sat)02:50:44 No.351417918

A.

I detect OP is getting tired.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:50:45 No.351417919

>>351417825

B!!

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:50:45 No.351417922

>>351417825

B

>>             Deranker !hQiBUENOxU 09/03/11(Sat)02:50:48 No.351417930

>>351417834

maybe if he either used the one i gave him or made one this wouldn't happen

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:50:51 No.351417940

>>351417825

B. got to go out swinging

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:50:55 No.351417951

>>351417825

bbbbbbbbbbbbb

>>            Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:51:14 No.351417985

tina strikes you in the asshole with a fist full of horse shoes, you laugh at the irony.

''time to die tina!'' she hits you in the asshole again with the bunch of horse shoes, you say ''it seems were at a stail mate,'' bored, you sit down on the floor and shit you pants.

A. continue to shit your pants

B. hate fuck tina's doorknob

>>             Silent !ZtIxy9nLcA 09/03/11(Sat)02:51:14 No.351417987

>>351417918

As am I.. I'm almost over this >.>

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:51:50 No.351418072

>>351417985

OBV hatefuck the doorknob

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:51:53 No.351418083

>>351417825

B! End this all, new story line K

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:52:14 No.351418118

>>351417985

shitty threadjack is shitty

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:52:19 No.351418132

>>351417930

F@G Deranker?

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:52:42 No.351418182

A. All the loose ends are wrapped up.

>>             OddPerspective !ROtYyzcY5Q 09/03/11(Sat)02:53:13 No.351418258

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>>351417985

lol. OP needs a trip.

>>351417987

Yeah I need to get some shut eye too.

Also, TINA PERM YOUR FUCKING WEAVE!

>>             Deranker !hQiBUENOxU 09/03/11(Sat)02:53:32 No.351418305

>>351418132

oh shi-

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:53:39 No.351418321

He steps behind you and you turn, grabbing at his gun hand as he moves towards his cuffs. You move your head out of the way and then try to direct his gun towards his partner. He pushes you onto the ground, and then the gun goes off.

You don't see where the round goes. But the the trigger is squeezed and another round goes off. The sound is loud in your ear. The cop rolls you over, and the two of you land on Tina's body. You scream. "Get off me, you piece of shit!"

You try to grab his gun away from him, but he is too strong. You're just a girl. You are screaming at him as you struggle. A shadow covers you, and the other cop is standing over the two of you.

You see blood pouring from his stomach. You see the knuckles on his fingers as he grips his pistol, pointing it at you. You see his finger move to squeeze. Why did it have to

The End

>>             Silent !ZtIxy9nLcA 09/03/11(Sat)02:54:04 No.351418376

>>351418258

I'm gonna stick it out and see if It ends soon so I can email him the entire story.

>>             OddPerspective !ROtYyzcY5Q 09/03/11(Sat)02:54:26 No.351418431

>>351418321

Nice one OP. It reminds me of those Candlejack thr

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:54:51 No.351418486

>>351418321

well done op. +1 internet for you.

>>             Deranker !hQiBUENOxU 09/03/11(Sat)02:54:56 No.351418499

>>351418321

Not bad, OP. Should do these more often.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:55:08 No.351418539

Oh shit someone mentioned candlejack now w

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:55:28 No.351418581

>>351418486

>>351418431

>>351418499

Thank you. I do this fairly often. That's why I have like thirty stories in my archive. http://storiesofop.blogspot.com

>>             OddPerspective !ROtYyzcY5Q 09/03/11(Sat)02:55:29 No.351418587

But seriously OP, great job. Reply to that email I sent you. You definitely have potential.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:55:30 No.351418588

>>351418321

Awesome, new story, and get a trip :3 you're very talented

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:55:44 No.351418626

>>351418321

Shitty ending is shitty

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:56:11 No.351418689

oh god not candlejack son of a bi

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:56:20 No.351418717

+ 1 internets

now do another

>>             OddPerspective !ROtYyzcY5Q 09/03/11(Sat)02:56:30 No.351418741

>>351418581

30 stories?

Maybe if you had a trip, I'd know who the fuck you were.

GET A FUCKING TRIP ALREADY.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:56:42 No.351418764

>>351418626

It's called a tragedy. At a certain point I can't write anyone out of the shit they get into.

It was inevitable. People chose this. It was their fault.

>>             Deranker !hQiBUENOxU 09/03/11(Sat)02:57:15 No.351418839

>>351418741

I've been telling him to use the trip i gave him!

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:57:19 No.351418847

>>351418321

nice ending.

great story

>>             OddPerspective !ROtYyzcY5Q 09/03/11(Sat)02:57:50 No.351418915

>>351418764

It's improved. Not a script. You're deciding everything. It's no one's fault but your own. Just saying.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:58:25 No.351418991

>>351418741

I never post under a trip. My stories always say, "ITT: Choose Your Own Story Adventure" or the same thing with zombies, or whatever it is I'm writing about at the time.

I've been doing this for something like eight or ten months.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:59:04 No.351419060

>>351418764

I always get the shitty endings in CYOAs :(

>>             OddPerspective !ROtYyzcY5Q 09/03/11(Sat)02:59:32 No.351419130

>>351418991

In that case, I think I have seen this picture around before.

But really, just get a trip.

When I started, I didn't trip either.

That changed fucking fast.

Do it. Seriously.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)02:59:48 No.351419155

>>351418915

It's not a script, but if people choose violence there are only a few ways out of it. If they don't choose a way out of it, at one point they run out of options.

I remember the first story I ever wrote like this people decided to shoot up their school. And then they died. What did they expect? Survival in a school shooting? Fuck no.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)03:00:00 No.351419187

>>351418991

another? :o

>>             OddPerspective !ROtYyzcY5Q 09/03/11(Sat)03:01:23 No.351419364

>>351419155

You're going to lose people that way. Don't give up. I could think of a thousand ways out of what you had going.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)03:01:26 No.351419373

>>351419130

I have never had anyone successfully hijack a thread. Not many people can type 120wpm without making a number of grammar or spelling errors, so people can generally detect my style.

I would use a script if I was writing in a group setting.

>>             Anonymous 09/03/11(Sat)03:02:32 No.351419530

>>351419364

I can think of a lot of ways out of things as well... but I will only allow them if they are reasonable.

I really just do not think she could have gotten out of that by that point. Why did she have to fight Tina? No one forced that on people. Once she did that... there was not really any reasonable way for her to escape.