The Stories of OP: Julio The Spic

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Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)00:32:16 No.311903258

In this thread you will choose your own story adventure. You will choose "A", "B", "C", or provide a write-in response where appropriate. I will only accept write-in responses that I believe are consistent with the story.

You wake up in the morning and slide out from between your sheets. You stand up and yawn, raising your hands high above your head. The sun is shining through the blinds, sending shadows dancing across your floor.

You look in the mirror and see:

A. A 24 year-old Hispanic girl with large breasts, light skin and a plump, round ass.

B. A white guy, in your mid twenties, with scars criss-crossing your chest. You have a rifle being carried by a skeleton tattoed across your chest.

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)00:33:02 No.311903397

In terms of voting tonight:

If there are some with reference to the post number and some without, we go with the post number.

If there are a lot of posts, it is first two out of three.

You can read all my previous stories at storiesofop.blogspot.com

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)00:34:39 No.311903664

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)00:36:05 No.311903942

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)00:36:24 No.311904010

You admire your body in the mirror. You have dark, brown hair halfway down your back and it shimmers in the sunlight.

You turn to admire your profile in the mirror, examining your tight ass. You turn back with a smile and then head over to your closet.

You consider what you would like to wear for the day.

A. A casual outfit; you are going to go with jeans and a t-shirt.

B. Something fairly sexy. You have a slinky black dress that you could put on. It may be early in the morning for that, but you would look fantastic.

C. ____________

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)00:36:58 No.311904136

>>311903258

A, i predict whoring

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)00:37:34 No.311904267

>>311904010

C, short skirt and halter/midriff top,

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)00:37:47 No.311904328

>>311904136

I predict a riot... I predict a riot!

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)00:38:30 No.311904502

>>311904267

also no panties, for shoes flip flops or casual heels

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)00:39:45 No.311904836

C. Scuba gear

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)00:39:47 No.311904846

>>311904010

C. Horse the band t shirt and pajamas

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)00:40:23 No.311904981

You grab a short skirt that you have from the closet and pull it on. It barely covers your ass, and the curve of your butt is emphasized.

You then grab a halter top and pull it on. The halter top can barely contain your large breasts, and you are showing ample cleavage. On the front of the top it says "/b/oo/b/s" in large letters.

You briefly consider going commando, but decide that it is too risky given the length of your skirt. You grab a pair of black panties and pull them on under the skirt.

You admire yourself in the mirror again. You look like a true fucking tart.

A. Head downstairs to the family store, which is below your apartment.

B. Give a call to some of your friends and see what is up.

C. ____________

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)00:41:24 No.311905206

>>311904981

B (equally whorish friends?)

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)00:43:35 No.311905705

C. Take off the guvking cancerous rule violating shirt and put on a horse the band shirt. Then head to the kitchen

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)00:43:48 No.311905750

You decide to call your best friend, Maria, to see what is up.

You dial her on the phone. "Yo, babe, what's going on?" you ask.

"Not much yet. Planning on rolling through your neighbourhood in a few minutes with Sandy if you want to hang out today."

"What do you planned?" you respond.

She laughs. "We ain't never got shit planned, babe... maybe roll a joint, pick us up some men. Get fucking smashed. You know the shit, babe, it's Saturday!"

A. "Fuck yeah, I'm in. Pick me up soon."

B. "Forget that shit. I'm going to find something else to do."

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)00:45:04 No.311906025

>>311905705

Guvking?

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)00:45:10 No.311906049

>>311905750

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)00:46:54 No.311906417

>>311905750

Pick A

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)00:47:01 No.311906440

>>311905750

C. How about you come over here and take this fucking shirt off of me and replace it with something less retarded after doing absolutely nothing sexual with me.

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)00:47:47 No.311906595

>>311906440

shut up, i got this

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)00:47:52 No.311906613

>>311906025

Fucking ipod

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)00:47:56 No.311906629

"Forget that shit. I'm going to find something else to do," you tell her.

You hang up the phone and walk downstairs. You start walking through the store when your Dad calls to you from behind the counter. "You aren't going to walk around dressed like a fucking whore in the middle of the day, are you?"

You turn to me. "Shut the fuck up, Dad. I'm 24. I don't need your shit!"

"If you get fucking knocked-up dressed like a slut we're not going to raise your fucking kid!" he yells at you as you walk out the door.

You step out onto the street and look around. There are some dealers down the street from you who you know. Other than that, there is not much happening yet this morning.

A. Head over and ask the dealers what's up.

B. Take a walk over towards the mall and see if you can find anything to do on the way.

C. Just hang out on the street corner out of sight of your Dad's shop and see if anything happens.

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)00:49:10 No.311906905

>>311906629

A + B? hang out with dealers at the mall? or just A

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)00:49:29 No.311906956

FUCK YEA YOU AGAIN. I missed you, i still remember the Sarah + that nympho girl story. shit made me cry.

Also, b

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)00:50:46 No.311907234

>>311906629

D. On the off chance that when she's inevitably gang raped the shirt is destroyed.

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)00:51:24 No.311907361

You head over to the dealers that you know. There are three of them hanging out with each other, smoking while leaning on their car.

"Yo, baby, what's up?" the first guy, Juan, asks you.

"Not much, how about you?" you respond.

He looks you up and down. "Looking fucking fine today, baby. You up for some action?"

You grin at him. "What kind of action?"

"Well, the three of us have some extra weed, and there ain't much action on the corner yet this morning... want us to smoke you up, babe?"

A. "Fuck off. I'm not that kind of a cheap whore."

B. "Yeah, sounds good."

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)00:51:37 No.311907425

>>311907234

Also d=a

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)00:52:06 No.311907516

>>311907361

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)00:52:15 No.311907541

>>311906956

I have written maybe 10 or so stories since then... but yeah, the Sarah story was fucking sad.

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)00:52:17 No.311907548

>>311907361

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)00:52:19 No.311907558

>>311907361

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)00:53:50 No.311907875

"Fuck off. I'm not that kind of a cheap whore," you say to him. He looks at you. "Oh, you ain't that kind of cheap whore, eh? Then why you dressed like such a fucking skank?" he asks you.

You ignore him and turn to walk away. You feel his hand grabbing at your ass and trying to lift up your skirt.

A. Ignore him and walk back towards your Dad's store.

B. Turn and slap him in the face as hard as you can.

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)00:54:22 No.311907981

>>311907875

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)00:56:24 No.311908372

>>311907875

C. Take off your shirt and burn it. Then suck this niggers 12 inch Cunt.

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)00:58:08 No.311908718

You feel his hand groping at your ass and you turn, striking him as hard as you can in the face. He staggers backwards and looks at you, amazed, as you stand there staring back at him.

His friends all call out, "Ooooooooooooh." He looks back at them, obviously embarrassed.

"Did you just fucking hit me, you stupid fucking skank?"

He immediately goes to grab for your hair and you kick him in the knee. He grimaces and steps back again. His friends begin laughing at him, and his face turns red.

He looks at you angrily and then pulls his gun from the back of his pants, pointing it at you while holding it sideways, trying to appear like a fucking gangster.

"Get in the fucking car, bitch. No one fucking hits me and gets away with it."

A. Run for it.

B. Comply. He fucking drew down on you.

C. "Oh, come on Juan. Is your cock so fucking small you can't take rejection from a chick?"

>> anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)00:58:44 No.311908862

>>311908718

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)00:59:10 No.311908963

C, super bitch activated

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)00:59:48 No.311909121

>>311908718

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:00:13 No.311909229

"Woah, woah, alright... dude. Fucking calm the fuck down. I'll get in your fucking car," you say to him.

He nods at you as he points the gun at you.

You hear someone calling out from behind you, "Stop right there!"

You turn and look. It's your dad, and he's holding a shotgun, pointing it down the street at Juan.

Oh fuck.

A. Stand in between the two of them and tell your Dad that everything will be fine if you just go with them.

B. Dive for cover.

C. Try and grab the gun away from Juan.

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:00:33 No.311909314

>>311909229

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:01:01 No.311909421

>>311909229

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:01:20 No.311909479

>>311909229

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:03:38 No.311910005

Knowing that this cannot end well, you immediately dive for cover behind one of the vehicles parked at the side of the road. Without hesitation, Juan opens up on your dad. Not surprisingly given his ridiculous, gangster-style grip, he doesn't hit shit.

Your dad advances in the face of the gunfire and raises the shotgun to his shoulder and then fires. A slug tears into Juan's chest, and you see him drop to the ground, blood pouring from his body. Your dad may be old, but once a soldier always a soldier.

Juan's two friends drew their weapons immediately as soon as your dad walked out, and they begin shooting as soon as Juan goes down.

Your dad pumps the shotgun and advances.

A. Go for Juan's gun and join in the gunfight.

B. Huddle behind your car and wait out the fight.

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:04:02 No.311910102

>>311910005

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:04:28 No.311910192

>>311910005

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:04:52 No.311910299

>>311910005

I was going to turn this into 'slut bear hunting' but whatever, B

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:07:50 No.311910951

You crouch behind the car and watch as your dad walks by you. He steps over Juan, who is lying on the ground and convulsing and coughing, blood pouring out of his mouth. You can tell that he obviously doesn't have long to live.

You watch as your dad continues to fire, driving the two gangsters into cover. You hear him shout in rage as he advances. *Boom*, *Pump*, *Boom*, *Pump*, *Boom*, *Pump*. As you watch, one of the gang members stands and begins firing at your dad again, but your father catches him with a slug in the arm just after he gets the first shot off, and he is spun around by the shot, falling to the ground.

Your dad pumps again and pulls the trigger, but the shotgun magazine is empty. He begins going for shells in his apron, but as he does the last gang member stands, takes careful aim, and begins shooting.

Round after round is pumped into your father's chest, and he goes staggering back, trips over Juan, and then falls to the ground in a pool of blood.

A. Go for Juan's gun to kill the last gang member.

B. Go for your dad's shotgun to kill the last gang member.

C. Run for it.

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:08:18 No.311911053

>>311910951

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:08:28 No.311911082

>>311910951

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:10:39 No.311911530

Seeing that it is all over for your side, you dodge out from the car and begin running down the street away from the last gang member. "Come the fuck back here, you stupid fucking bitch!" he hells at you as you run.

You don't look back. You know his face. Julio, who used to come to your birthday parties as a kid, just shot your father to death in the street over a scrap.

You keep running, turn the corner by your father's shop, and keep going down the street. You keep running until your lungs burn and you can't run any further. Hot tears are pouring down your face.

A. Phone Maria and tell her to pick you up.

B. Phone the police.

C. Phone your brother and tell him what happened.

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:10:53 No.311911584

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:11:11 No.311911650

>>311911530

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:13:26 No.311912151

"Maria," you whisper into the phone. "You need to come pick me up. No, no, not from my house. I am at the corner near the flower shop. No... just, just come right away. I need your help right away."

You lean against the wall, tears pouring down your face and onto your halter top. You hear sirens a few blocks away. At least someone called the cops to take your father's body away...

A couple minutes later Maria arrives with your friend Sandy in the car. You jump in the back right away.

A. "Julio just killed my father. We need weapons so we can track him down and get revenge."

B. "Julio just my dad... and all over some stupid fucking fight! How the fuck am I going to tell my brother?"

C. "Julio and his other gang members just killed my father. I'm going to fucking kill every last motherfucking one of them."

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:14:46 No.311912475

>>311912151

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:15:01 No.311912537

>>311912151

>>311911584

>>311911650

FUCKING BULLSHIT B WAS FIRST YOU COCKSUCKER

OP IS NOW A FAGGOT

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:15:03 No.311912541

>>311912151

C, for the love of god C!

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:15:13 No.311912585

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:15:35 No.311912649

>>311903397

see

>>311912537

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:15:42 No.311912674

>>311912151

Maria's a hardcore chola. I can feel it.

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:15:58 No.311912735

>>311912151

HEY!

>>311911584

B was first, ya railroadin' fuckwit!

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:16:10 No.311912786

"Julio just killed my dad... and all over some stupid fucking fight! How the fuck am I going to tell my brother?"

Maria looks back at you. "What? Your father? He killed your father?"

"Yeah, and my dad killed Juan and one other guy I don't know in the process... it was brutal."

Maria looks back at you in shock. "What the fuck are you going to do now, baby? If you were a witness the gang is going to be out to get you..."

You hadn't considered that.

A. "You need to hide me."

B. "You need to take me to see my brother at work. He will know what to do."

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:16:41 No.311912909

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:16:50 No.311912939

>>311912475

FUCK YOU ASSHOLE.

/mad

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:17:00 No.311912977

>>311912786

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:17:09 No.311913022

>>311912537

>>311912735

Read:

>>311903397

If you vote with the reference number your vote goes ahead of someone who votes without. I'm not railroading, asshole. I never do.

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:19:07 No.311913533

>>311912475

>>311912977

if this is samefag, i swear to god i hate you

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:20:22 No.311913812

>>311913533

No the latter post number was just me. I thought if she went to his brother, they could kill Julio together.

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:20:24 No.311913822

"You need to take me to see my brother at work. He will know what to do," you say to Maria.

She nods back at you. Sandy looks back at you. "What is your brother going to do?" she asks you.

"How should I know?" you respond tearfully. "I just got my dad killed... maybe he will fucking kill me! I don't know."

Sandy nods and reaches back to caress your arm. "It's alright, baby. You'll be okay." You nod at her and sniffle. It's not going to fucking be okay. Your dad is dead.

You arrive at the welding shop where your brother works and you all get out of the car.

You walk towards the shop and one of the guys working sees you and calls out towards your brother. Dave walks out from the shop. Your father didn't want you to have Hispanic names.

He looks at you crying and he immediately rushes over to you. "What's wrong, baby, what happened?"

A. "Julio and some other gang members just killed our dad... and now they're going to kill me because I was a witness!"

B. "I just got our dad killed because I was dressed like a whore... Julio fucking killed him!"

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:21:03 No.311913952

>>311913822

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:21:30 No.311914057

>>311913822

/B/

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:21:34 No.311914074

>>311913822

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:21:35 No.311914078

>>311913812

chick + chick revenge is so much cooler than chick + guy revenge though

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:22:22 No.311914252

>>311913822

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:23:01 No.311914389

"I just got our dad killed because I was dressed like a whore... Julio fucking killed him!"

Dave looks at you. You feel the sting of the back of his hand against your face. You gasp and stagger back, but then his arms are wrapped around you.

"I'm sorry... I'm sorry... I didn't mean to do that... but our fucking father..."

He looks up at the sky and shouts, "I'm going to fucking kill that slimy piece of shit!"

Everyone stares at him as tears stream down his face. He looks back at you, "I have to hide you. It won't go well if you are around when I kill them all."

A. "No! I will help you! We can kill them together!"

B. "Okay. Where are you going to take me to hide?"

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:23:47 No.311914567

>>311914389

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:24:19 No.311914675

>>311914567

Really? What kind of a pussy are you?

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:24:35 No.311914740

>>311914389

also, action needs to happen

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:25:14 No.311914859

>>311914675

y u no wincest

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:27:38 No.311915338

"Okay. Where are you going to take me to hide?" you ask him.

He looks back at Maria and Sandy. "We will go to their house. Maria and Sandy, you two lead the way and I'll follow with my sister."

Maria nods and jumps back into her car. Sandy looks somewhat reluctant, but she follows and gets in the car beside Maria.

Dave pulls you by the hand and throws you into the passenger seat of his car, an old Camaro.

Dave follows Maria as she pulls out of the lot and into the street. Dave begins to pull out beside her, when his car is broadsided by another vehicle. You are slammed into the passenger side window and you close your eyes for a second.

When you open them you hear gunfire. Dave has pulled his handgun from the glove compartment and is shooting at the men who hit you with their vehicle. One of them has got out of the car and is shooting at you.

A. Get out of the car and run.

B. Take cover behind the car and see the outcome of the gunfight.

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:28:45 No.311915581

>>311915338

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:30:59 No.311916047

You get out of the car and begin to run for it. You look back to see that your brother has been hit in the shoulder, but one of the gangsters is down as well. You will have your whole family dead before the day is out, you briefly think to yourself. Maria stopped her car after the accident, and you see Sandy throw the back door open for you. You jump into the back of the car, and Maria hits the gas.

Maria turns back and looks at you. "What the fuck do we do now?" she screams at you.

"You are going to get everyone fucking killed!" Sandy shouts as well.

You begin crying as well. You are already out of sight of the gunfight, but you can feel in your heart that there is no way your brother decided.

A. "Just take me somewhere to hide me."

B. "We need to find a way to get weapons. Once you get me some guns, I'll do the rest of it myself."

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:31:37 No.311916179

why is everyone making this girl out to be a pussy?

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:31:53 No.311916228

>>311916047

/b/

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:32:04 No.311916269

>>311916047

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:32:13 No.311916312

>>311916179

I don't know but it's making it a bitch to write... I feel disappointed just reading the responses.

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:32:48 No.311916446

>>311916228 anon here,

>>311916179

you're welcome

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:33:01 No.311916495

>>311916047

I was going to turn her into a bear hunter, but some other faggots interrupted me

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:33:17 No.311916550

>>311916047

B for gods sake

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:34:03 No.311916730

"We need to find a way to get weapons. Once you get me some guns, I'll do the rest of it myself," you say to Maria.

She looks at you. "You're going to take on a whole fucking gang by yourself? There's no fucking..."

You cut her off, "Shut the fuck up! They just fucking killed my brother! If I wanted your fucking input I would ask for it, bitch. Now take me to your fucking house so I can make some fucking calls." Maria just nods and turns back to driving.

She pulls up cautiously to her house. Everyone knows that the two of you are friends.

A. "Sandy, get out of the car and go check the house to make sure it's clear."

B. "Alright, park the car in the back lane so that no one will know you are home and then I will decide what I am going to do next."

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:35:07 No.311916945

>>311916730

B, i have an idea

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:35:23 No.311916997

>>311916730

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:35:50 No.311917104

>>311916730

I dont like that sandy bitch and im pretty sure she will die if A happens

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:37:28 No.311917447

"Alright, park the car in the back lane so that no one will know you are home and then I will decide what I am going to do next," you tell Maria. She turns her car into the back lane and pulls up behind her house. The four of you get out of the car and Maria unlocks the back door.

Your hands are shaking, but you tighten them into fists and look at the two of them. "You don't have to fucking help me, but don't get in my way. Those fuckers just killed my whole family and everyone I love. If you don't want to help, I don't mind. But I swear to fuck, I will kill anyone who gets in my way."

They both look at you and nod silently. Fucking good.

A. "I am going to phone Dave's friend Steve, who has a good weapons connection, and see what I can pull together."

B. "Maria, your boyfriend James has a bit of an arsenal from drug dealing... any way we can get our hands on it?"

C. ______________

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:38:35 No.311917680

>>311917447

C: Get some fucking beer

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:38:56 No.311917759

>>311917447

c.) threesome before some shit happens

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:39:03 No.311917798

>>311917447

C. Fucking flamethrowers... flamethrowers everywhere

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:39:36 No.311917900

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:39:52 No.311917942

>>311917447

C, decide that you didnt really need your family anyway, be happpy, and go bear hunting

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:40:45 No.311918118

None of those are reasonable responses...

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:41:20 No.311918229

>>311917447

C. Jump off a duck.

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:42:11 No.311918414

>>311918118

Who are you to dictate that?

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:42:44 No.311918512

>>311918118

C. Call Mario, the mob boss, and make this a Mob vs Gang war

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:43:08 No.311918606

"Alright, we need to plan, but first I need a fucking drink," you say to the girls. Sandy finally grins. If there is one thing that slut can do it's drink. You flips her blonde hair over her shoulder. "If there's one thing I can do, it's drink," she says to you.

Maria looks over at her. "Yeah, and suck a lot of fucking cock..."

Sandy looks at her and the three of you begin giggling. You feel the tears drying on your face. You head over to the fridge and three of you each grab a beer. You plop down on the couch beside them and you all toast. "To my family," you say. "Your family," they respond. You guzzle down your beer.

A. Get more to drink. Your whole family is fucking dead. You need to get wasted.

B. Back to the task at hand. Finding some weapons.

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:43:44 No.311918740

>>311917447

This one:

>>311917680

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:44:20 No.311918855

>>311918606

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:44:28 No.311918890

>>311918606

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:44:37 No.311918916

>>311918606

B. stop using the word fuck so much

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:44:42 No.311918936

>>311918606

A, forget yo family

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:45:23 No.311919094

>>311918606

dont wanna get wasted then shoot ppl

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:46:12 No.311919275

>>311918916

FUCK YOU YOU FUCKING FUCKER FUCKER FUCKER FUCK! FUCKITY FUCK FUCK FUCK!

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:46:56 No.311919422

>>311919275

i'm fine with the word fuck.. it just doesn't make for good storytelling.

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:47:32 No.311919551

You look at the two of them. "I don't need one fucking drink, I need like 15."

Maria and Sandy both smile and laugh. You head back to the fridge. Maria pulls out lemons, and you grab the tequila from the counter. Sandy lays out three shot glasses.

"To family!" you all shout.

You begin pounding shot after shot. You feel like you can't stop, and you want to drown in the burning feeling of the liquor as it pours down your throat.

You try to pour more from the bottle, but there is nothing left. You look over at Maria, and she has flopped down on the floor beside you. She is looking up at your through her curly hair and crying. Sandy has her arm on your shoulder and is trying to sing some song, her words slurring together.

A. Give Sandy a kiss.

B. Head into the bedroom and flop down on Maria's bed.

C. Stagger out the front door.

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:47:41 No.311919574

>>311918916

then get off and have your mommy tuck you into bed, and don't forget to do your macaroni art for 3rd grade tomorrow

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:48:18 No.311919689

>>311919551

c. killing time

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:48:23 No.311919701

>>311919551

A!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:48:32 No.311919733

>>311919551

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:49:51 No.311919998

>>311919574

because using the word fuck means you're an adult?

>no

it just doesn't make for a good story.. it ruins the immersion. it's like he's begging for you to feel the emotion of the tragedy, but with using the word fuck it does the opposite.

but who am i to judge

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:49:58 No.311920028

>>311919689

GLORIOUSLY FUCK YOUR ASSHOLE WITH A BROOM STICK MADE IN RUSSIA, WHERE THE QUALITY IS LESS THAN THAT OF A GOOD AMERICAN BROOMSTICK, THUS SO THAT IT WILL SPLINTER, AND FROM THIS DAY FORTH YOU WILL BE KNOWN AS 'RUSSIAN SPLINTER ASS GUY'

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:51:10 No.311920291

>>311919998

>implying someone else give a fuck about what you think/

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:51:16 No.311920310

You turn to Sandy, whose head is resting on your shoulder. You look over at Maria, whose eyes are beginning to close on the ground beside you. You tilt Sandy's lips towards yours. She looks up at you, surprise in her eyes, but she doesn't stop you.

You begin to kiss her, and she immediately responds by slipping her tongue inside your mouth sloppily. Her hands move down to your ass and begin to grope you through your skirt. You grab onto her waist and you pull her over the passed out Maria and into Maria's bedroom.

Sandy pushes you down onto the bed drunkenly and then jumps onto you, her lips covering your chest with kisses. "Mmmmm, I love your fucking boobs," Sandy says to you.

Her hands slide up under your halter top and push it up over your large breasts. Suddenly her lips are against your large nipples, her tongue sliding back and forth against them. You feel them hardening against your lips.

A. Spread your legs and tell her to get down and eat your pussy.

B. Let her guide and see what she does next.

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:51:51 No.311920407

>>311920310

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:52:00 No.311920437

You take one last drink and stagger toward the door.

Sandy grabs you by the arm, "Hey, where you going babe?"

"I've got to go find some guns." The words come out slurred but you pull away from Sandy's grip.

As you reach for the door a handle, there is a rather emphatic banging on the door. You hear someone shouting for you to open up.

A. Look through the peep hole to see who it is.

B. Try to find an escape route.

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:52:33 No.311920555

>>311920310

>>311920407

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:52:46 No.311920596

>>311920310

this story just got stupid... fucking erotica? we all just beat off 5 minutes ago anyway..

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:53:09 No.311920677

>>311920437

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:54:02 No.311920854

>>311920437

B, paranoid parrot time

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:54:21 No.311920917

>>311920291

i'm sorry, you must have missed the part where i said "but who am i to judge"

it's just my opinion.. overusing profanity in a story demeans it's value and makes the story feel "cheap".

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:55:29 No.311921127

>>311920437

>>311920310

tha fuck

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:55:48 No.311921192

Sandy continues to lick and suck at your nipples, and then pulls her shirt up and over her head. She's thin, and her nipples are a bright pink against her white body. She then begins struggling to get her jeans off her legs. You laugh at her as she finally manages to drunkenly pull them off.

She looks at you and giggles. "What are you looking at, bitch? Huh? Never seen a girl struggle to get out of her panties before?"

She laughs and pushes you back onto your back. She kisses you again, and then you feel her hand between your thighs. She presses her hand against your pussy through your panties, and she can feel how hot and wet you are.

"Mmmmm, you fucking want this, don't you, baby?" she asks you.

You smile and nod at her. She kissing neck as she slides her fingers under the waistband of your panties and to your hole. You gasp as her fingers push into your pussy, and you press down against her and moan.

She begins sliding her fingers slowly in and out of you, and you wrap your arms around her. "Yeah, that's good, isn't it baby?" she whispers in your ear.

"Do you want to eat my pussy, baby?" she asks you.

A. "Yeah Sandy, I want to eat your pussy."

B. "No, just make me cum... just keep doing what you're doing and make me cum."

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:56:54 No.311921389

>>311921192

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:57:03 No.311921419

>>311921127

First one real. Second one wasn't.

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:57:21 No.311921484

>>311920310

>>311921192

not OP

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:57:47 No.311921570

>>311921192

is not op

seriously man why you fucking up my story?

if i wanted to masturbate to a book, i would go read Mein Kempf

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:58:59 No.311921813

>>311921570

>implying YOU are OP.

His other stories are not just pointless gunning, lrn2 sarah&chris for example.

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:59:26 No.311921913

>>311921192

>>311920310

I have a sneaking suspicion that these two are fake. I hope they are... because that's a shitty story. No one fucking reads erotica books. Would you kindly get the fuck out.

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)01:59:40 No.311921952

So who the fuck is OP here? Jesus christ I want to finish this story before I hop off of /b/.

idgaf that I can read it on his site

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)02:00:17 No.311922084

Erotica = not-op

Vengeance = op

Op, please proceed :]

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)02:00:34 No.311922135

"Yeah Sandy, I want to eat your pussy," you say to her. She smiles at you and slides her panties down and off her legs. She immediately mounts your face and presents her pussy to your lips.

You begin to lick her pussy lips, and she grinds her pussy down against you. She moans loudly, pushing against you. You feel her hands grab yours and her fingers intertwine with your own.

She is rubbing back and forth against you as your tongue tries to find her clit. You keep licking, your tongue playing back and forth, trying to find the point that makes her moan the loudest. You feel her thighs tighten around your head and you pick up speed, focusing on the one point that is making her moan and gasp. Her fingers tighten around yours and she lets out a scream and then collapses beside you on the bed.

She slides back down beside you and kisses your lips. "I taste good," she says with a smile. You smile back at her, and close your eyes sleepily. You are just so tired and wasted...

*****

"What the fuck is going on here?" you hear shouting. You wake up to see Maria's boyfriend is home and pointing into the bedroom at you and Sandy naked in the bed.

A. "James, it's my fault! We got all wasted... I need your help!"

B. Stand up and run over to James and grab him. "James, unless you want us all to fucking die, we need your help!"

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)02:00:47 No.311922177

You suddenly remember that your entire family just died, you begin to cry.

A. It was all a dream.

B.Jump out the window.

C.___________________

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)02:01:09 No.311922251

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)02:02:04 No.311922427

>>311922135

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)02:02:06 No.311922437

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>>311921913

You realize OP here has done erotica stories before right? Look through his site, a majority if not all stories have some sex included.

Also OP, you are a brilliant fucking writer. Props.

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)02:02:10 No.311922450

now everyone wants to troll op's story

thanks, fags

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)02:02:38 No.311922541

>>311921913

The story is always up to /b/, not the writer. You don't like erotica, don't pick erotica. I always try to give people options for a violent, non-violent, and sexual turn at most points. That's just what I do...

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)02:02:42 No.311922556

Someone's completely fucked the story up. Shame, OP could have had a good story eventually. Fucking faggots... always ruining good threads.

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)02:03:39 No.311922713

the post with more"FUCK' is the ops

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)02:03:46 No.311922729

Also, OP should tripcode

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)02:04:25 No.311922847

You get in a little fight and your mom gets scared.

A. Your moving in with your auntie and uncle in bel-air.

B. The game.

C.????

D. Profit

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)02:04:47 No.311922926

>>311922729

This. Please do so in the future OP, just in these type of threads so we can clarify who's a faggot pretending to be you and who's not.

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)02:04:58 No.311922961

>>311922713

lol'd

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)02:05:21 No.311923041

You stagger over to James and grab him before he has the change to react. "James, unless you want us all to fucking die, we need your help!"

He looks at you. "What the fuck are you talking about?"

"Julio killed my father and brother, and his gang is going to come and kill us all now unless you fucking help us."

He looks at you, stunned. "Where the fuck is your shirt, though?"

You laugh at him. "I tell you that we are all in danger and you ask me why my fucking tits are out?"

He shrugs. "Why are your tits out?"

Maria laughs at him. "Just listen to her, James. She's being serious. If we don't figure out what the fuck to do fast, they are going to come and kill us."

He turns and looks at Maria. "Then what the fuck is she doing here?" He turns back to you.

A. "I know you have weapons. I need them. And I need your help."

B. "I know you have weapons. Those fuckers are going to come here to kill us. We need to all be ready."

C. "Just give me some fucking guns and I'll be on my way. You can stay out of it, pussy."

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)02:05:44 No.311923114

>>311922847

also lol'd

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)02:05:53 No.311923145

>>311922847

>- Open the door -Then get on the floor - everybody walk the dinosaur

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)02:06:11 No.311923218

>>311922961

Not all of my writing is like that. Just how this girl sounds in my mind...

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)02:06:26 No.311923271

>>311923041

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)02:07:58 No.311923572

>>311923041

The word 'fuck' appears in 7/8 lines in that one post... come on op, you're better than that. You clearly have the ability to come up with a good story, so use your words.

>> OP !h8hr/9duKU 02/25/11(Fri)02:09:53 No.311923941

"I know you have weapons. Those fuckers are going to come here to kill us. We need to all be ready," you say to James.

He looks at you. "Are you kidding? I have like forty grand in weed in this place... I can't have a battle here... my fucking boss would kill me."

You look at him. "If you don't do something now, you're going to be fucking dead. I suggest you think of something quick."

You notice Sandy standing behind you, and she places her hand on the small of your back as you speak.

He looks at you. "Alright, alright. I can't believe Maria got me into this fucking mess... I'll give you a shotgun and a couple of handguns, and you can take Maria's car, if you just get the fuck out of here right now."

A. "Deal."

B. "Not good enough, asshole. I need more help than that."

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)02:10:42 No.311924096

>>311923941

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)02:11:19 No.311924219

>>311923941

>> OP !h8hr/9duKU 02/25/11(Fri)02:13:25 No.311924600

"Not good enough, asshole. I need more help than that," you say to him. He looks at you and then back at Maria, who is now standing behind him with his arms folded.

"I'm not going to fucking die for this shit..." he says to Maria and then trails off. She just looks at him, her arms folded.

"Alright, I know some guys who may be able to help... I'll give you the weapons, and then you need to convince them to help you. But I'm not going to be in on this shit," he says. He looks back at Maria. She's still shaking her head.

"What do you expect, baby?" he asks her.

"I'm going with her. She's my best friend. You going to come with me, or not?"

He shrugs. "Alright, I'm in. I'm in. But this better not end up with me dead for some... fuck, whatever."

A. "Alright, call the other guys and get them over here. We need to kill every last member of that gang, or at least the leader."

B. "We don't need anyone else. The four of us can get this done ourselves. We just need to find Julio and kill him."

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)02:13:27 No.311924605

>>311923941

"Two shotguns, the handguns, and a backpack full of weed."

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)02:13:41 No.311924644

>>311923941

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)02:13:54 No.311924686

I would just like to take this moment to apologize to op and anon. When I began my trolling in this thread I was planning on hijacking this thread however, op writes too fast and too well for me to keep up. I just wanted to make someone smile and be apart of something bigger than myself, is that so wrong?

Lord Inglip saw fit to warn me of the error in my ways and so I will bid you all a fond, heart-felt good-bye.

But seriously >>311905705

fucking guvking lol

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)02:14:25 No.311924776

>>311924600

>> OP !h8hr/9duKU 02/25/11(Fri)02:17:33 No.311925407

"Alright, call the other guys and get them over here. We need to kill every last member of that gang, or at least the leader," you say to James.

He looks at you. "You are one crazy bitch." He is still staring at your tits. "Ummm, could you put a shirt on at least?" he asks you.

You laugh at him. "Yeah, alright. Maria, can you get me some more appropriate clothes? I can't be dressed like a whore in this shit. James, get on the phone to those guys and get them over here. If they want to know what their reward will be, tell them who we're hitting. There will be enough fucking coke keep an army high for a week. And they can have it."

You turn back to Sandy and smile. She gives you a quick kiss on the cheek. You grin at her and then walk back into Maria's room. Maria follows and then begins grabbing clothing out of her dresser for you and Sandy.

A. "The two of you don't need to come with me on this shit... it's pretty risky."

B. "How are we going to get this done? Do you have any ideas?"

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)02:17:38 No.311925430

This story completely went to shit a while ago. It's not even worth reading. I don't know what kind of dum/b/ass tries to drag a shitty story like this out so far.

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)02:18:30 No.311925623

>>311925430

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)02:18:30 No.311925625

Keep up the great work OP. Wish I could stay 'til the end, but I've got work. Night Sir.

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)02:18:35 No.311925644

>>311925407

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)02:19:56 No.311925926

C. Stop writing.

>> OP !h8hr/9duKU 02/25/11(Fri)02:20:23 No.311926011

"How are we going to get this done? Do you have any ideas?"

They look at each other. Sandy begins, "Well, no one really knows that I am involved. If I go in there to begin with then I can probably kill some of the guys at the door... that should make it easier for us all to get in, right?"

You and Maria look at each other.

A. "Brilliant. That will hopefully help us get the jump on them... all those guys like white bitches."

B. "Are you shitting me? I'm not going to put you into danger like that... there is no way we are going to let you go in there alone."

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)02:20:57 No.311926107

>>311926011

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)02:21:47 No.311926279

>>311926011

C. The bitch dies.

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)02:21:51 No.311926299

>>311924600

Getting the other guys involved will go horribly, horribly wrong.

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)02:23:05 No.311926551

Oh, shit, another story from you!

I hope I can read all this before it ends to get in on some decision making.

>> OP !h8hr/9duKU 02/25/11(Fri)02:23:55 No.311926719

"Brilliant. That will hopefully help us get the jump on them... all those guys like white bitches."

Sandy smiles at you and gives you a quick peck on the cheek again. You can't believe that the three of you are going to do this. As you are all getting dressed you hear the back door open and some guys walk in.

Once you are dressed you walk out to see James sitting at the table laughing and drinking beer with two beefy looking white guys. They have leather jackets on.

"Heard you bitches are looking for a bit of revenge," the first man says. "We're always down for hitting soft targets, but this one seems like a tough nut to crack. James here was telling me there are at least seven hardcore gang members that hang out at their headquarters. What's going to keep me alive, and why is it worth it for me to risk my life on this?"

A. "What's going to keep you alive is we're going to send Sandy in first to kill their guards by pretending to be a slut. And what's in it for you is their ganghouse is filled with coke."

B. "We're doing this for justice! Those guys killed my family!"

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)02:24:02 No.311926743

>>311926011

I type too slowly.

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)02:24:43 No.311926874

>>311926719

A. Also DAMMIT! AGAIN!

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)02:24:56 No.311926913

>>311926551

Its not a good one.. you aren't missing much, not yet anyway.

The best one I ever read was one about a hospital with a guy and girl and they end up on a football field and dude gets hit by a car.. that was a good one, if it was OP

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)02:25:11 No.311926959

>>311926719

>> OP !h8hr/9duKU 02/25/11(Fri)02:25:25 No.311927006

>>311925430

I guess a dumbass like me. I always do my best. If it sucks, so be it. All I do is let people pick options.

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)02:26:31 No.311927220

File1298618791.jpg-(3 KB, 104x126, Joy.jpg)

Gonna have to leave this thread now. I expect a great story on your site, OP.

Also,

OP got a trip code.

>mfw

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)02:26:49 No.311927274

>>311926719

C. "We're doing this for justice! Those guys killed my family! You can have everything inside, I WANT THEIR FUCKING HEADS."

>> OP !h8hr/9duKU 02/25/11(Fri)02:27:35 No.311927421

"What's going to keep you alive is we're going to send Sandy in first to kill their guards by pretending to be a slut. And what's in it for you is their ganghouse is filled with coke," you say to the men. They look at each other.

"How much coke?" the first one asks. You grin. You have them.

"We'll let you have all of it, and you will walk out of there ready for retirement," you respond.

James looks back at you. "They get all of it?" His eyes narrow.

"All of it," you respond.

The two men stand and they reach out to shake your hand. "Well, miss, I think we have ourselves a deal. When do we start?"

A. "Do you have anywhere we can go to plan? This place is likely compromised."

B. "We go right away. Get all the weapons and load up. There isn't much planing involved in this shit..."

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)02:28:30 No.311927586

>>311927421

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)02:28:32 No.311927593

>>311927274

That's vaguely terrifying. I'm reminded of Tim Minchin in his Angry (Feet) poem.

"And when I die - KILL!!! - die..."

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)02:30:08 No.311927859

>>311927421

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)02:30:31 No.311927947

>>311927421

let's get this over with

>> OP !h8hr/9duKU 02/25/11(Fri)02:31:39 No.311928144

"Do you have anywhere we can go to plan? This place is likely compromised," you say to them.

They look at each other. "We can't go to the clubhouse, but we have a warehouse near here with our weapon cache. If we want to get this done right, that's where we go."

You nod to them. "Wait here while I grab our weapons for the ride over," James says to them.

You stand there in the kitchen looking at each other. Sandy wraps her arm around yours and pulls you close. The two men grin at each other and watch closely. Sandy gives them a fierce look.

James returns with a couple of shotguns and two handguns and hands them to yourself, Sandy and Maria. You take one of the shotguns. The two men pat their chests where there are obvious bulges.

A. "Okay, we should stick together while driving. They might be looking for Maria's car already."

B. "We don't need to go all together. Better to stay separate in case they are watching for us and they see us together."

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)02:32:40 No.311928317

>>311928144

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)02:34:22 No.311928614

File1298619262.gif-(29 KB, 350x350, 1277373595724.gif)

Also, OP, your stories are definitely awesome

>> OP !h8hr/9duKU 02/25/11(Fri)02:35:24 No.311928772

"Okay, we should stick together while driving. They might be looking for Maria's car already," you say to them.

They nod and you follow them out the back door. They have two bikes parked outback. The four of you jump into Maria's car, with you in the front seat beside Maria. James is relegated to the back, where he begins to pout. Maria looks in the rearview mirror. "Don't fucking pout!" she says to him.

The bikers take off and you follow them. The trip is uneventful, and you do not need any gang member's cars on the road on the way there.

You arrive and enter the warehouse. There are no guards, but there is a heavy lock on the door. When you get inside the bikers unlock a heavy set of doors and slide a blanket off their gun rack with a flourish. "Ma'am, what would you like to use?" Their rack is filled with automatic weapons.

A. "M4, please."

B. "M14, please."

C. "Just handguns, please. I don't think I'd do well with those heavier weapons."

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)02:36:29 No.311928951

>>311928772

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)02:36:39 No.311928984

>>311928772

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)02:38:41 No.311929310

>>311928772

"Got an RPG?"

>> OP !h8hr/9duKU 02/25/11(Fri)02:40:13 No.311929578

"M4, please," you say sweetly. You put the shotgun down on the table and the men hand you an M4. If there is one thing you learned about your father, it was how to handle weapons.

You pull the charging handle fully to the rear, cant the weapon to the left, and look in the chamber. Empty. You let the bolt go fully forward, raise the weapon to your shoulder, and pull the trigger, letting the pin forward.

"Ammo?"

The man points to another locker, which he then opens. Loaded magazines galore. You grab a magazine, load the magazine, and charge the weapon. You place the weapon on safe and turn back to the man.

"Ballistic plates? Tac vest?"

He looks at you and shakes his head. "Gotta carry that shit in your pockets, little lady." You begin loading your pockets with magazines. The others choose weapons, although the rest of them do not have a very good idea what we are doing.

A. "Alright, let's go. Sandy, you will go in first and try to off the guards while we wait outside. You call for us and we will all rush in together."

B. "Alright, let's go. Maria and James will head for the back door right away to cover the exit. Sandy, you will go inside first and try to off the guards. Maria and James will wait outside while the rest of us rush the building."

>> OP !h8hr/9duKU 02/25/11(Fri)02:40:44 No.311929661

>>311929310

When you are expecting to be fighting room to room? Nope...

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)02:40:56 No.311929698

>>311929578

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)02:42:52 No.311930040

>>311929661

Well an M14 ain't gonna do much good in that situation either.

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)02:42:54 No.311930049

>>311929578

lol both shitty ideas

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)02:43:57 No.311930240

any1 else imagine the hispanic chick as Esmeralda from the hunch back of noltre-dame

>> OP !h8hr/9duKU 02/25/11(Fri)02:44:00 No.311930250

"Alright, let's go. Sandy, you will go in first and try to off the guards while we wait outside. You call for us and we will all rush in together."

Sandy looks at you and smiles. She has concealed two handguns in the back waistband of her pants. She still manages to look beautiful even though she is wearing pants and a t-shirt, her long, blonde hair curled around her face.

You smile back at her.

The four of you get back in the car, the bikers get on their bikes, and then you pull out of your warehouse on your way to the mechanic center and bar that is where the gang keep their coke.

"Speed and violence," you tell the rest of them in the car. "If we get bogged down, we are fucked. It's all about speed and violence."

James looks like he is about to shit himself.

A. "Buck up, James. You can learn to be a fucking man."

B. "James, are you going to be able to handle this shit? Maybe you should bow out?"

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)02:44:40 No.311930377

>>311930250

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)02:45:53 No.311930650

>>311929661

I was thinking "aim it at the front door, obliterate entrance."

>> OP !h8hr/9duKU 02/25/11(Fri)02:48:43 No.311931138

"Buck up, James. You can learn to be a fucking man," you say to him. He looks at you and smirks. "Whatever. I'm not dying for this shit," he says to you. You laugh. "I don't plan on dying for this either," you respond.

You pull over about a block away from the mechanic shop and you all get out of the vehicles. It's broad daylight on a Saturday, but there is not a lot of traffic around. The cops don't often come to this part of town, but they certainly will when this goes down.

You do not have eyes on the mechanic shop from where you are, because there is a large hedge in the way. You nod to Sandy, "It's all on you now, babe. As soon as we hear shooting we will come for you," you say to her.

She smiles at you and blows you a kiss. "Catch you on the flipside, babe," she says.

She begins sauntering down the sidewalk and then turns right into the parking lot of the mechanic's shop.

You begin to question the plan in your head. You are just going to rush into a building guns blazing without knowing what's inside? You try not to let your fear show. You look over at James and Maria and they both looked scared. Even the bikers look nervous, standing beside their bikes in the open carrying assault rifles.

You hear shooting.

A. All of you rush for the front door.

B. "Change of plans, you guys go in the front and I'll go in the back."

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)02:49:37 No.311931317

>>311931138

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)02:49:46 No.311931351

>>311930250

B. I don't trust him not to get shot while stuffing his pockets full of cocaine.

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)02:50:48 No.311931526

>>311931138

>> OP !h8hr/9duKU 02/25/11(Fri)02:51:44 No.311931689

"Change of plans, you guys go in the front and I'll go in the back," you say. James looks at you in shock. "What the-" but the first biker grabs him by the arm and they go running towards the front of the mechanic's shop. You rush around the back and into the alley. You advance slowly, your weapon at the ready. You take the weapon off safe and approach the back door to the shop. You can hear gunfire from the front, and it sounds like a battle.

You walk up to the back door, and it is ajar. You nudge the door with your foot and push inside. You see a long, dark hallway with doors off to each side.

A. Clear each room in sequence.

B. See if you can make it to the front as fast as possible to help in the gunfight.

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)02:52:19 No.311931792

>>311931689

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)02:53:01 No.311931918

>>311931792

Getting shot in the back while running is not a good idea.

>> OP !h8hr/9duKU 02/25/11(Fri)02:53:44 No.311932063

You walk up to the first door and put your hand on the handle. You hear the gunfire intensify from the front of the building, but you remain calm. You open the first door, and there is no one inside the small room.

You move to the second door, edging along the hallway. You place your hand on the door handle, and then open the door. There is a woman lying on the bed, naked, and she shrieks as you open the door. You look at her, and then at the weapon in your hand.

She has seen your face.

A. Off her.

B. Move on.

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)02:54:11 No.311932143

>>311932063

No mercy.

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)02:55:12 No.311932324

>>311932143

This

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)02:55:28 No.311932366

>>311932143

this guy is a winner

>> OP !h8hr/9duKU 02/25/11(Fri)02:57:00 No.311932612

You look her in the eyes, and for a brief moment there is realization as she sees your intent to pull the trigger. You squeeze on the trigger, and one round bursts loudly from your weapon and catches her in the chest. She falls back onto the bed, clutching at her chest and gasping for air.

You pull the trigger again, this round hitting her in the forehead, and she falls back onto the bed, silent. They will know you are back here now.

You walk over to the next door and open it. Empty. You have cleared each of the room. There is a hallway that goes to the left that you are sure must run into the rest of the building.

You slowly edge down the hallway, shuffling your feet and keeping them on the floor to shoot.

There is still intense shooting out front. A man bursts out from a door at the end of the hallway and goes running towards you, looking over his shoulder. He appears to be unarmed.

A. Off him.

B. "Stop, motherfucker. Where's Julio?"

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)02:58:05 No.311932800

>>311932612

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)02:58:40 No.311932922

>>311932612

C. Shoot him in the stomach, "Where's Julio?" Kill him if he produces a weapon or shouts for help. When he's done talking, off him.

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)02:58:45 No.311932938

>>311932800

indeed. fucking indeed.

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)02:59:00 No.311932984

>>311932800

NO MERCY.

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)02:59:59 No.311933175

>>311932984

>>311932938

>>311932800

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)03:00:34 No.311933272

>>311933175

Safer to kill everyone

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)03:00:53 No.311933332

>>311932800

Dubs!

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)03:01:07 No.311933380

>>311933175

Don't give me that look. Mexicans are notorious for their skill in hiding lethal weaponry.

>> OP !h8hr/9duKU 02/25/11(Fri)03:01:14 No.311933402

You don't even wait for him to look back at you before you pull the trigger. Three rounds strike him in the chest and he stops in his tracks. He looks at you, then looks down at the blood pouring from his chest. He begins staggering, still trying to stand. His bloody hands grasp inside his shirt for his weapon, and you stand there, pointing your M4 at his chest.

He finally manages to begin fishing a pistol from beneath his shirt, and you pull the trigger again. Your round catches him in the throat and he drops to the floor, blood pouring from his neck.

You step over the body and into the doorway.

You peer around the doorway and into the next room.

It is the front room of their clubhouse, which is attached to the garage. There are four taking cover behind various objects and shooting at the front door and the front counter. Some people are shooting back from outside. The bodies of two men are lying at the front door.

A. "Sandy, where the fuck are you?"

B. Begin shooting at the four guys.

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)03:02:52 No.311933726

>>311933402

I called it.

I called that shit. I knew he had a gun somewhere.

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)03:03:25 No.311933826

>>311933557

>> OP !h8hr/9duKU 02/25/11(Fri)03:04:03 No.311933939

You begin firing at the first man, who is behind a couch about twenty feet away from you. You fire seven rounds, a number of them catching him in the back, and he immediately collapses forward onto the ground.

The other three turn to see you and begin firing back at you. You pull back from the doorway as rounds strike the wood around you.

Fast and aggressive my ass. You're fucking bogged down.

A. Keep shooting at them.

B. "Everyone, if you rush them right now I will pin them down. Get the fuck in the front door right now!"

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)03:04:04 No.311933941

>>311933402

B! Flank em!!

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)03:04:16 No.311933987

Also, reload before entering room.

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)03:04:44 No.311934069

File1298621084.jpg-(178 KB, 1366x768, dunedesktop.jpg)

Just made this wallpaper. What is /b/'s opinion?

General Wallpaper/desktop thread.

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)03:05:13 No.311934150

>>311933939

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)03:05:23 No.311934179

>>311933939

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)03:05:27 No.311934195

>>311934069

Are you lost?

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)03:07:00 No.311934476

>>311934069

>Why don't you take a seat over here ?

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)03:07:47 No.311934600

>>311933402

B. The quicker they die, the more likely it is that Sandy lives.

>dude fishes a pistol from under his shirt

>>311933380

Point taken.

>> Anon 02/25/11(Fri)03:07:58 No.311934633

>>311934476

Agreed!

>> OP !h8hr/9duKU 02/25/11(Fri)03:08:23 No.311934704

"Everyone, if you rush them right now I will pin them down. Get the fuck in the front door right now!" you call out.

You hear more gunfire from the front of the room. It sounds like they are making a rush for it. You pop out from behind your cover and begin firing at the three men. Not surprising given you called out your plan, one of the man had his weapon pointed right at the door, and begins shooting as soon as you pop your head out.

Before you can even get a shot off you are forced back into cover. You put your weapon around the corner and begin shooting, emptying a magazine at random into the room.

Bolt fully to the rear. Drop the magazine. Load a magazine. Hit the bolt release.

You hear screaming, and it sounds like James has been hit.

A. Rush into the room. Your friends are going to get chopped down unless you do something.

B. Keep shooting around the corner.

C. "Everyone fall back. We're not going to be able to take them."

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)03:09:25 No.311934876

>>311934704

You either die a hero, or live long enough to see yourself become the villain.

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)03:09:31 No.311934887

>>311934704

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)03:10:01 No.311934977

>>311934704

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)03:10:09 No.311934993

>>311934704

>> OP !h8hr/9duKU 02/25/11(Fri)03:14:03 No.311935637

You got them into this. There is no fucking way you are going to let them die for you. You burst around the corner.

You see the man who had been shooting at you, and you watch as he pulls the trigger, his handgun aimed directly for you. You feel a round strike your left arm, but you manage to aim at him and shoot. Because you are moving, you do not hit him, but he falls back behind the couch.

You see James bleeding on the floor at the entrance to the doorway. You continue advancing into the room. You hear screaming. You realize it is you. You see Sandy stand up from behind the counter and begin firing at the remaining men. Her face is covered in blood and there is blood pouring from her chest. One of the man turns to fire at you, but you shoot first, catching him in the arm and sending him spinning to the floor.

The other man takes aim at Sandy, but one of the bikers is in the doorway and the blast from his weapon knocks the man to the ground.

A. Dive to the floor. There is still the man behind the couch to worry about.

B. Continue advancing and shooting.

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)03:14:18 No.311935676

If you're getting particularly into this, you should probably put up OP's site in another tab or bookmark it in case this 404s and you can't find the new thread.

Just saying.

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)03:15:24 No.311935865

>>311935637

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)03:15:52 No.311935931

>>311935865

Rambo up in this bitch.

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)03:15:56 No.311935942

>>311935637

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)03:15:57 No.311935948

>>311935865

like a fuckin boss

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)03:16:40 No.311936056

>>311935931

Oh, also, OP has no qualms about killing off the main characters.

I'm pretty sure we're going to die.

But we'll die with honor.

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)03:18:29 No.311936365

>>311936056

Die with honor??

We basically killed our dad for dressing like a whore!

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)03:19:02 No.311936440

>>311936365

We'll die with style.

>> OP !h8hr/9duKU 02/25/11(Fri)03:19:04 No.311936448

You continue advancing and shooting, firing at the back of the couch. The man behind the couch is shooting at the open doorway, and the first biker is hit in the leg and drops to the ground. You edge around the side of the couch and the man turns to his right, trying to bring his weapon around. You open up, firing directly into the side of his head.

Skull fragments and globs of brain matter spray hit you in the face from the backblast and for a moment you cannot see. It feels as if someone has hit you in the chest, and you fall back over into the couch, slumping down beside the man's shattered skull.

You open your eyes and watch as Julio, who had his gun pointed at you, takes a round in the side from Sandy. He falls to his side, his eyes meeting yours. Suddenly Sandy is standing over his head, her shoe on his neck.

"Fucking spic."

She pulls the trigger.

You look down to see blood pouring from a wound in your chest.

A. "Sandy, get me the fuck out of here."

B. "Sandy, is everyone else all right?"

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)03:19:10 No.311936465

The end is near, /b/rothers. You gonna get killed by the faggot that shot you in the shoulder.

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)03:19:44 No.311936539

>>311936448

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)03:19:47 No.311936547

>>311936448

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)03:20:42 No.311936695

>>311935637

>> OP !h8hr/9duKU 02/25/11(Fri)03:21:55 No.311936855

Sandy flops down beside you and pulls you into her arms. She looks down at the wound in your chest. You feel blood dribbling from between your lips.

"Is everyone else alright?" you ask.

She looks at you. "James is dead. Good riddance. Maria took a round early in the fight. I think she'll be okay." She looks back over her shoulder. "One of the bikers was hit, but he's good to go. Looks like they're going for the coke right now."

You gasp, and you feel the blood bubbling up from between your lips.

A. "Sandy, you have to get me out of here."

B. "Just leave me. I'm going to die anyways. Get out of here before the cops get here."

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)03:22:12 No.311936904

File1298622132.jpg-(48 KB, 640x480, bookspyninja.jpg)

>>311936448

B. Be noble. She'll talk and carry.

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)03:22:43 No.311936974

>>311936855

Fuck.

I can't make this decision.

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)03:23:10 No.311937032

>>311936855

B. Then have a conversation with the bad guy's corpse.

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)03:23:52 No.311937137

>>311937032

What kind of conversation are we going to get out of an undead spic?

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)03:25:28 No.311937376

>>311937137

A one-sided, but cathartic one.

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)03:26:20 No.311937485

>>311937376

How thoughtful.

>> OP !h8hr/9duKU 02/25/11(Fri)03:26:36 No.311937525

"Just leave me. I'm going to die anyways. Get out of here before the cops get here."

She looks down at you. "There's no way I'm going to leave you here... how could I leave you here after all this?"

You shake your head. "Are you going to fucking carry me? Is Maria, if she's injured? Do you trust those fucking bikers? I'm dead, Sandy. Just leave me."

She's crying softly, and she begins to grab for your arm to try and pull you. You shake her hand off.

"I said fucking get out! Run! Now!"

She looks at you. She is covered in blood.

"Babe... I'm sorry," she says and then turns away. You watch her back as she walks out the front door.

You look around the room. There are bodies everywhere. You briefly see one of the bikers charge out the front door with a large bag over his back. At least they got the coke.

A. Wait. Death, or the cops, will be here soon.

B. Take the handgun from the guy beside you and kill yourself. You can't go to prison now.

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)03:28:01 No.311937686

>>311937525

A. Wait.

We've got to have this conversation with zombie Julio.

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)03:28:07 No.311937703

>>311937525

Make cops believe you are a victim.

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)03:30:15 No.311938018

>>311937525

>>311937686

>>311937703

These.

>> OP !h8hr/9duKU 02/25/11(Fri)03:31:27 No.311938171

You lay there, waiting. You look over at Julio, whose dead eyes are staring at you.

"Why did you have to kill my father?" you ask him.

Hot tears are rolling down your face. Everything else is so cold. "You came to my fucking 12th birthday party, you asshole. My father gave you a fucking beer... and you shot him... for nothing."

His glass eyes are staring at you.

"And now we're both dead because of it. And my whole fucking family!"

You hear your phone ring. You slide your hand into your pants and pull out your phone. You can barely handle it because it is slippery with blood. The screen reads, "DAVE."

You smile and chuckle to yourself and then close your eyes. A family of survivors.

The End

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)03:33:26 No.311938426

File1298622806.gif-(100 KB, 699x720, 1273804860532.gif)

Fuck you, OP, fuck you

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)03:33:54 No.311938515

>>311938171

My favorite part of your stories is seeing you cap them off.

You're damn good at it, and it always makes the time spent worthwhile.

That is a satisfying ending.

>> OP !h8hr/9duKU 02/25/11(Fri)03:34:42 No.311938620

>>311938426

...

Usually it's a tragedy. Sorry, dude. People just don't make the right choices.

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)03:36:00 No.311938802

>>311938171

You managed to save an incredibly shitty start with a pretty good ending. Well done.

>> OP !h8hr/9duKU 02/25/11(Fri)03:36:10 No.311938829

>>311938515

Thanks.

I didn't find this story satisfying until we got near the end... I don't know. Until we got near the end everyone was just yelling and shouting about random shit the whole time...

I didn't feel it until we got out of the car, really.

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)03:37:10 No.311938972

>>311938829

/b/ is simultaneously the best and worst audience possible.

>> Anonymous 02/25/11(Fri)03:37:31 No.311939006

>>311938829

thats cuz every other line was "fuck we have to _______".. iunno, it was a crappy story till people started dying... such is the way of life

>> OP !h8hr/9duKU 02/25/11(Fri)03:40:47 No.311939466

>>311939006

Because of the specific events there were a lot more dialogue choices than normal. The main character wasn't in as much control as normal, so there was no way to just walk out and do the next thing.

The Stories of OP

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